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Beka Rhade 2005-04-15 . chapter 3
They should share a room or go to the Maru.
Christieanne-Anna 2004-08-17 . chapter 3
get them to share Rhades room
Vee017 2004-08-15 . chapter 3
hehehehe, this is awesome! Body Swap!
I think Beka and Rhade should either stay together in his room, or go to the Maru together.
Oh and what happens if one has to change or shower...hm...haha might get a laugh out of that.
Great story, and even if you don't think you could do it, I think this should morph into a B/R story while they're figuring it out.
You're a great writer, and I beleive you can pull it off. It would be great. Humour and slight romance on the side.
Awesome stuff. I love this story and hope to see it continued;D
C.V. Wilson 2004-08-11 . chapter 3
Dude, they should totally switch rooms. You to learn more about each other.
Kennedy MacKay 2004-07-14 . chapter 2
Cute, but it needs more Trance. Everything needs more Trance.
the Lady Katherine 2004-07-14 . chapter 3
Weird...
At first, I was like, oh no, not a "switching bodies" thing, that's so cliche'. But you make it work nicely. I liked the whole voice recognition thing. It figures, right?
My vote is for them to share a room. You don't necessarily have to turn it into a romance (although I really wouldn't mind all that much - *hint*hint*). I think it would just be funny to have them cooped up into one room, thinking things like "Is that really what I sound like?" or "Does my hair really get that messy in the morning?" or "Oh my God, Rhade has lavender-scented aftershave?" You know what I mean?
Oh well, have fun writing and please post again soon! Toodles!
Rommie's Voice 2004-05-10 . chapter 2
I enjoyded that I could just see it happening in my head but please dont turn this into a romance story I think it might spoil it. Plus im not a fan of the Beka Rade paring. Still youve got me hooked now looking foward to your next update.
Rommie's Voice 2004-05-10 . chapter 1
Good start I'll definatly read the next part.
Donna Lynn 2004-05-10 . chapter 2
What? They swapped bodies? HAHA! I like how this is playing out so far.
Kennedy MacKay 2004-05-04 . chapter 2
Well, as long as you're taking suggestions, what about some Trance/Rhade? There's virtually none of that. Of course it might be hard cuz he's in Beka's body, but they have to switch back some time, right?
MagpieDreamer 2004-05-03 . chapter 2
*laughs delightedly* oh, this is going to be god. I like how you make them just gradually coming into the awareness of something not quite right...
And the image of Rhade waking up in Beka's body was priceless!
*does best Oliver Twist impression* please sire, can I have some more sir?
iorekbyrn 2004-04-30 . chapter 2
um...don't exactly know whats going on but Id still like more :) please update soon!
prin69 2004-04-30 . chapter 2
*GASP*! what has happened! oh well, of course they switched bodies, but, WOW! totally did not see that one coming. love the story. wacky, crazy, cool, neat, and interesting all in one. neato. aw. please do romance! i agree with custardpringle. it would so rock! but hey, if not this one, then at least on a later fic. know what ya mean, it's hard.
update whenever. happy writing!
C.V. Wilson 2004-04-30 . chapter 2
Loved it! I like the direction this is going. Beka and Rhade switching places it genius.
Callie-Cat 2004-04-30 . chapter 2
Wow! Odd! This is really cool, though odd. I like it, more please? LOL!
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