Wa, the first part was so sad, but I loved it. I absolutely LOVE angst. Well, I really hope that one day you update this fic ... And please don't have it be one of those fics where Ranma finds some other widow with kids and then falls in love with her, and then they all get together and live happily ever after without Akane. Wow, that was a long sentence. Anyways, laters! ^__^

Well, I must concur with whomever made the statement that you could write, Shachan. Nicely done.

Wow! This is very good for your first (?) non-(very very very) funny fic.

udpate please

WAH!
Why did you do this to me Sha-Chan?
I was all happy and you make me cry. What's wrong with you?!
*sniff*
...okay I'm better now.
*sniffle*
NO I'M NOT!
::Sobs Wildly::
I HATE YOU!
(Real Review)
That was a great start Sha-Chan! It's very depressingly well written. Upsetting job well done!
(phyciatric therapy session)
::couch magically appears::
Sha-Chan talk to me. Are you having family troubles? How does this make you feel? C'mon talk I care. Are things not going well betwixt you and your friends? Hm...
Okay not talking. Ahh...the youth of today.
I tell you generation X will be the death of us all.
LOL
Kikaili

this is awesome! I gotta start reading ranma fics again. Just a note for future reference, Riko is a girl's name... anything that ends with -ko is a girl's name. Anyway, I'm so sad that Akane died but please write more soon!

interesting, please continue...