sorry for just reviewing ow. i have read since the first chapt and was too absorbed in the story.
so far, it is really good! you make me believe the devl fruit can ve inherit... but just a thing, when i reread the manga, sensei said that the fruit cant be passed on, i guessed.
LOL. Thank ou for such a wonderful story with detailed and awesome plot!
I am reading the next one now!

This was a really great story :)

This was a really wonderful story; I very much enjoyed reading it! The concept seems like it would be difficult to do, but you've managed it flawlessly.

I haven't read the story yet, because the summary is indicating that there might be some spoilers concerning Nico Robin. Are there any spoilers in this story?

wow!! this is really a great fic ^_^ I really like it, hope you will write another Robin story(I really like her ^_^), anyway, great writting!!

Wow...that was...good! I really liked Kohato at 17! This was a very good story, I'm surprised Oda-sensei didn't think of it first!! Good job, and excellent writing!

Ah!! Cliffy! Continue!

Professer might get lucky and get beaten to a bloodly pulp by Robin, Smoker and his crew might arrived in time to save his neck or one of the Straw Hat pirates might stop Robin from killing him and the worse case for him is death. Will Smoker and his crew will be making an apperance in this fic, I'm sure Smoker or his sceond in command won't be happy at the professer for what he did to the kid.

It was a typo, I meant "chivalrous nature." It's been corrected.

Finally you've updated! I like this chapter, especially the bit where Kohato is subjected to Owlshiki's experiments. Ugh, you're good! One thing though, Sanji's chivalrous or chivalry?

Wow, this is terrific. The idea of hereditary effects has interested me too, ever since I noticed that (canonically, at least) none of the 20-plus fruit users have any kids we know of.
I'm really impressed by your creation of Owlshiki- not only an effective villain, but the owl-like quirks are like something Oda would come up with, and make him seem more "One-Piercey" than most original characters.

*whistle*...that was really interesting. I enjoyed it. But I'm confused on one thing, how does the power of the devil fruit passed to Kohato again? Robin's genes were changed when she ate the fruit and there must be some alleles that are able to express this phenotype. Robin's should be recessive, and Shuban, well heterozygous? Sorry if I'm rambling like this... *hits self*.

Awesome story featuring my favorite One Piece character:
the one and only Nico Robin.
On a small side note:
Luffy's scar is located under his left eye.

There is bad news for the navy you know, the Straw Hat pirates are here as well and unless you have someone powerful or skilled enough take down Luffy(who took down Croc, Anlong, and Kuro) the navy have no chance since Zoro, Sanji and Luffy and easily take care of 50 people each unless they are more skilled/powerful then them. When will Enzu(he ate the Devil Fruit of Lighting and is one of the five Pirate Gods-I think) is going to make an apperance in this fic and Enzu is the ruler of Skytopia. I would like to see Smoker and his crew,Ace(Luffy's brother and ate the Devil Fruit of fire), Buggy and his crew, Kuro and his crew and Irom Madien herself make an apperance in this fic.

OH MY GOSH! ANOTHER CHAPTER! AND IT'S AWESOME! Can't wait for the next one! Good luck!(^.^)