 Dragoon-Yue 2006-04-04 . chapter 1That made my eyes water... |
 Alex 2005-12-23 . chapter 1 wow that was pretty accurate i've only read up to the part were he's all *i won't go back* and ra ra ra ra ra ra ra ra ra ra... anywho i found it highly informative, keep it up! |
 Janet0041 2005-06-13 . chapter 1OH!! THIS WAS VERY CUTE! TOT |
 CB 2005-06-10 . chapter 1 *sob* THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! *starts to tear up* SO BEAUTIFUL!
Thank you for that lovely translation, even if you say that its off, its still a wonderful piece to me. |
 the-key-of-the-twilight 2005-02-06 . chapter 1this is very cute. I really LOVE this and it's a really nice translation too. I LOVED this part also. this was a really nice scene and i felt that this scene really portrayed how close Chrno and Rosette really are. this story was great! Keep up the good work! ~the key of the twilight |
 Bitch of the Highway Thieves 2004-08-06 . chapter 1 Hey, Ive seen the entire series via a friend's computer. We watch the originals through subtitles ^_^! Anywho, I just want ya to know that for an avid fan like myself, your fic eases the pain of Chrono's death (or Rosette's death if you read the manda!). Happy writting! |
 Purin-chan 2004-07-29 . chapter 1^^; Cute different perspective on the events in that volume. I, too, loved that part. |
 RuByMoOn17 2004-07-25 . chapter 1sad! but nice |
 meow~ 2004-06-29 . chapter 1 ^_^ i like the way you translate this XD!
aw that was one of MY favourite scenz! (ah must learn japanese!) |
 Ruby-dream 2004-06-07 . chapter 1I'm going mad. I couldn't believe it that there are lots of fics that I hadn't reviewed yet!! It's all thanks to ff.net that is so slow at making CC new link>.< Sorry, half is my fault either. Lol. Anyway, this fic is so sweet, especially with Chrno's thought of ROsette. Somehow it was so sweet and lovingly. You described Chrno very well^^ I like it! |
 azngirlLH 2004-06-07 . chapter 1That's pretty sad... great job, though.
~ Ja ne. |
 Izayoi 2004-05-12 . chapter 1That was so sweet yet angst. I think you did a fairly good job on it. I wish there was a Chrno Crusade section but oh..well. Anyhow, I havent read the manga or seen the anime but I am already hooked...lol. I have searched a few sites and I enjoy the layout and the plot it has.
Anyways, good job.
Ciao,
Izayoi |
 Dark Kasuga 2004-05-08 . chapter 1Owie! So Lovely! ^_^ Estubo kawaii! I just love your fics, please right more ^__^... I just love this Story, hell... |
 Isinhachan 2004-04-19 . chapter 1Wow!! that was so lovely so cool XDD thank you for the fic ^^ |
 Scaiya 2004-04-16 . chapter 1Ooh, thank you! I've seen the raws of this fabulous chapter and have been dying to know what the accompanying dialogue is about. With your story I could finally whip out the manga and read along :)
In a few places I don't think I would have understood what was going on from just your descriptions alone (like when Rosette apologizes for her weakness - in the manga it seems to be paired with an image of Chrno trying to drag Rosette away from that ill-fated meeting with Joshua and her not being able to leave.) You might be able to incorporate a few more of those references. At the end, too, you might take a moment to polish your translations/grammar - while I get the gist of "Egoist and never obey rule," you might be able to rephrase it more poetically :)
Overall, though, I'm really glad to have read this! Finally, I have a sense of what this fantastic scene is about, and it's all thanks to you :) Thanks for the hard work! |