great job

i really like this ff its great lol update son!

Greetings! Good story you've got going here. But, hey, what's with the line about the two ships being about the same speed, but the Wave Dancer is better armed and has a brilliant captain? Are you implying that Morgan is more brilliant than Jack! Don't dare impugn the brilliance of Captain Jack!! :)

Whe! This is good stuff. I hope that you write more of it son.!

Hey! this works quite well. Its good How you dont' just put said all the time but make it more descriptive. Anyways..carry on the good work.. I'll be reading
charlotte

can't wait for more!