Good story so far. Very well writen and very suspensful. I can't wait to see what happens to HB and Liz next. The implied HB and Liz attraction is good to. Keep it up!

This is Awesome so far but you left me hanging and you haven't updated in awhile! SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! I REALLY NEDD TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I DON'T LIKE IT WHEN PEOPLE POST FICS AND NEVER FINISH THEM!

Awesome, simply awesome. Feed me more. PLEASE!

Man, you really did hit this one right out the park! And a Movie fic no less! Sure, I professed my dislike for MF when reviewing your other stellar effort, but this quality of this story has won me over. You know, I think you have done a better job of putting Hellboy and the gang into Proseland than that Chris fellow who writes the novels. Sure, his stuff reads like really good fanfiction, but you have something that reads like an actual novel. And it's not movie-time mushy! And everyone is closer to their comic personality (thank the baby Jesus) and no Myers in sight! Cripes. I will be waiting with baited breath for a new chapter.

Oh nice.

no myers... :*(
oh well. good ficcie anyhow!

Umm... how can I say this as calmly as possible... UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

Woot woot! Getting good...

MORE MORE MORE! Very good so far. You should write for a career.

Cool. :o) This is getting good...

Wonderful chapter... I look forward to an update.

Ooh! Great chapter! I like the idea of the poltergist history of the town! More please. ^_^

I'm really loving this story. I'm so glad you updated. You have nice, polished prose and I appreciate that. You also seem to have a good grasp of the characters. Keep it up!

Bravo! Update soon :) You have a talent for writing, the descriptions were just wonderful! Is writing a hobby for you or are you pursuing it professionally?

Great stuff so far. Like your characterizations and the plot as we've seen. Will be checking back : )