FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Ryu Gunslinger 2004-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseits okay, a bit a spacing more often could make it better... sigh, i wish i still had my files for one of my parody, but FF.net deleted it all, and i have no intention of rewriting it all |
| Chooser of the Slain 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseIf I hadn't already played through this game to get a 1/4 ratio, I might wonder where this cliffhanger leads to. I question your choice of beginnings; you're starting it halfway through the game and that makes no sense. |
| Courtney Henry 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseSomeone Please Write A Review! |