I am sad! It appears that you have abandoned this really great story - please prove me wrong and gift us with some more of your fab writings!

Fun=) I'd like to read more of it. It's very original and you write good.

Ahaha!! Funny, no?

And what is not going to be good about this flight? You have left me hanging... if I had a choice I would prefere you update the inuyasha one first but it has been a long time since you have updated here... please write more of something soon

~Alasse

tee hee. What a cute story idea. I like your ficlet a lot. Please continue it soon, I can't wait to see Snape cope with airline food and the pre-flight safety warnings.

*taps fingers impatiently* when are you going to post the next bit? *poke*

~Alasse

hi

at times you have some very lovely descriptions like "he knashed the enamel once again" or something like that. Excellent. humurous as well as descriptive. hard to do. but then at other times, you just make silly mistakes.

vary instead of very
do instead of due
lied instead of laid. (lied is to tell a lie, a falsehood. lay is when you lay down...)

a simple proofreading would tidy up this very interesting story. you have a good grasp on humour without overplaying it which is a rarity. thoroughly enjoyed it.

later
robyn

*waves hand* you want to update. don't make me use the imperious on you 'cause you know i will-your buddy in dementedness and insanity ALPHA WOLFE

*glares* post now or else *grabs math book of DOOM* *evil laughter* me love the way Snape goes through security... what is he wearing?
Alasse

I love you! Thank you you kept going wich is great! And you used the annoying flight attendant lady! Whoopie! *hugs* Anyway I have more than one chainsaw so HA! *commences evil laughter* *cough* *cough* Anyway... Keep going!
~Sparkles

dude! i think i saw him at the airport too...this is effin' awesome

hey! this is WONDERFUL! please continue... or I'll... *takes out kitchen knife* I know where you live *chuckles EVILLY* mwuahahaha.. ANywho good story
ME

funny now get to work or i'm bringing my bull whip to school on monday

Oh, please more! This will be wonderful, I know. I hate it when authors don't leave the characters in, well, character, but you have. I would love to read on to see what, exactly, happens.
Rossalinda

Extremely cute story! The plot was chiefly fluffy, which I was in dire need for, after a tear jerker from Fiction Alley's "Dark Arts" section. My only suggestion is to make the chapters longer- if there will be more chapters. I certainly hope you'll continue this plot- I'll be a candidate to read it!
On a side note, this happened to be the first story I read after coming home (by way of planes!) from London. It was humorous to compare my recent airport encounters to those of Snape's!