cute but man Sesshomaru is so mean to Inuyasha

It was pretty funny;and well... I really liked it. So sorry if its not much bye.^^

great story!

morning...

"Hy you still want to play kill the human" Inuyash said
"no I do not want to play, go and sea what dad is dong for a living" "ok" "y dad whats are you doing?" "nothing gost looking in the sky,why do you ask?" "because sasshomaron dont want to play kill the human with me" "well why dont we play kill the human I will be the human and you try to kill me" "no thanks i think i will take a nap instead" "but you already took a nap" "no I dident" "yes you did" no I dident" "yes you did" "did not" "did to" "did not" "alright go and take a nap already!" "no thank i think I will play kill the human with sassomaro" "leave me in bean soup" "your crazy mommy daddy gone cra..." "dont say eny thing to your mother please and you can go with me and sea me kill a demond" "ok"

COOL

this was so good, but you need pictures of this.

Please update soon!Also I think you need to make the chapters a little longer.All in all it was great.

That was so cute!Especially when Inuyasha said,"That was sporkingly deliceous mommy"!AW!

this rocked! u have to make chapter 5!

Where is the rest of the story? Gotta give you props its good but you need to finish it up or is it the whole story?

this.,.is so Cute!
DON'T STOP! KEEP GOING!

O! Your story is awesome! It's like watching every Inu and Sess moment of the series in chibi, but better! will you write more?

uh oh...

...o_0...

i think u should keep on writing and we will keep on reading

bye!