You know, was assuming that Lloyd was going to be interested in Ham, when reading this.

I really like the way you have Scout Will here Keep it up, so glad you're updating :)

hey!

that was good, i just read your story, and i did see that you write it a long time ago, but you didn't finish it! so sad!

you have to continue; i 'll die if i don't know what happens next!

Hey Orton, love the new chap, Lloyd seems so nice, he and Jake would look so cute together.

I have a little question, is Jake going to the girl's campus or the boy's campus?.

Please keep writing

wow this ch was amazing, i love Lloyd he's so nice i hope hamilton and jake can fix things, or is it going to be like a fued between ham and Lloyd, oh i can't wait to see i hope things work out for the best plz plz plz update soon

omg! Bella is about to beat hte crap outta someone . . . i bet it's Jake!

i *love* the "talking-on-the-phone buddies" thing lol that was sweet!

i think you should have had more Jake in this chapter, rather than the phonecall and a tiny paragraph.

liked the princess/prince thing with the two girls. sweet.

update soon, my blood pressure isn't that good as it is lol i need updates!

well done my love, that was really good. :)

T*R*O*Y

heya chick!

well, we know i like this. can't wait for the next chapter - the suspense is killing me! send it around ASAP, i'm dying to see what happens, what Ham does, who Bella's about to beat up lol well done hon!

TORIAx

Hi Girls,

Thanks for reading. I will try my best to keep the updates regular. I have written 5 pages of part 4 and I'm hoping to get a few more pages in, before I send them to get proof read. So I will keep the updates at a more quicker pace. Thanks for your patience :D

Orton

wow you updated, don't stop here keep it going will ham ever forgive jake and who was that shadow dum dum dum...

Hey,

I'm so glad that you finally decided to update. I love the new part. Please make the time between updates shorter if you can (the anticipation isn't good for my blood pressure).

hey:) just wanted to say that i'm still waiting for your updates...along with your other fic/s -"strange but true"..i hope you continue writing..people need their jahammer fix..i know i do:)nki

good story! cant wait for next chapter! Good going

Update this one FAST, lol.
Read the challenge ages ago, was kind of *nnyyih* but I really like the way you tell it. :)
There's a lot of grammar and typo stuff coming up for me - the kind of thing you don't see in your own writing but a second eye picks up on. Wish there were people within the YA fandom who were beta-ing. I can beta for basic grammar, but not confident of my reading of what's OOC or what's not, and bad on teenspeak. (but teenspeak is one of your strengths, in the stories I've seen by you.) If you want a grammar beta, I could try and help.

ooh mad Ham. i LIKE mad Ham! sexy. **drags mind from out of gutter** moody, pensive, brooding Ham was good too. :D Scout and Will are hilarious. the Dean was good too - not too lenient, not too harsh, definitely plausible in his reaction to Jake's confession. i think i said before that you write feelings well - good on ya! Ham and Kate being shocked at the Dean calling an emergency family dinner was excellent, if a little...i want to say haunting but i don't mean that. but it'll do. it was quite scary, seeing the way you write them as being resigned to being second best with Steven. whatever, it was good. anyway, this looks potentially very interesting and good - again, well done for producing another entertaining and fantastic fic Orton! :D