That was one of the best shoujo-ai's I've ever read. Well, honestly, it's the ONLY good shoujo-ai I've ever read. It had plot, laughs, drama. It was wonderful. My favorite little bit was:

"Astrologically speaking, the stars all aligned.

Scientifically speaking, absolute zero was reached.

Phylosophically speaking, Nervana was acheived."

I know that's a totally stupid part to have as my favorite, but I just found it really clever. ^^ I'll definately be checking out your other stories.

I luv this story!
i've never really liked Yuri, but i gave(can't remember the word in english-.-)a chance and luckely i read yours and now i actually like yuri and a little bit yaoi(CloudXLeon no others).
but i ended up with some question, like what did Kairi parent's think about her being to girls? And did Ryo's wish came true?^.^ and things like that, so could u maybe make a sequel? and could u make some romace with Aerith and Tifa(together).
And last r u lesbian? i wouldn't have a problem with, absolut not, my uncle is gay, so i kinda live with things like that since i was 7(that was when they told me), but r u?

Luv Ale

Seeing as I'm the kind of person who hates it when people fav and don't review, I wanted to fav this, so I must review it.

I wish this was the story of my life. I seriously wish this was the story of my life. Kairi got her happy ending, mine's not here yet. But this is perfect. I can't think of any other words to describe it. It's just perfect. This is one of the stories I can come back and read if I'm depressed and it will cheer me up every time. I'm sure of it. So, I'm going to go look at your other stories now.

On second thought... it's three am, I need to be awake in 8 hours... I should go to bed. But after I sleep those 8 hours, I'll come back and look. Thanks for writing such a perfectly amazing story.

-Kiki

*squeals* I LOVE that song! :D And picturing Cloud singing You're So Damn Hot to Leon is absolutely PRICELESS. *squeals again* I still love how this is going. Yay! :D

Got to say, this is AWESOME so far! Your style is just amazing, you know that? Kind of a fluid, structured looseness that I could see describing Kairi or, heck, anyone unsure of themselves. Readin this whole thing, oh yes, and I know it will not disappoint.

Your work is pure art. I love how you give all of these characters new depth, making then feel and act in ways that are just like them, yet unheard of. i love your work. I just had to comment on this once.

...This is the third time this has happened. I go looking on my friend's favorite lists and find a truly amazing author. I squeal, and decide to stalk said author's fics. Without a doubt, I've read and adored more than one a long, long time ago. And yet, I never looked up the author! Ugh! I hate being an idiot!
Kinda missed the boat on that one, tho'. Anyway!
This fic is absolutely amazing! Your writing is the perfect combination of poetry, humor, and absolutely adorable situations. And you kill cliches! Bless thee!
On top of all that-- IloveyourwritingyouareamazingandI'mreallyreallyjealousbutthat'sOKbecauseyou'restillwritingandthatmakesitallwonderfulperfect-- you have great taste in music. Thanks to you, I know know of the wonder that is Melissa Etheridge.
Thank you so much for writing! Especially a good shoujo-ai fic. The world needs more! ^ ^

Wow.
That's all that can be said. When it comes to fanfiction, this is art. I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

YAY! -runs around inna circle-


Whe!


Okay, umm... I'm pretty sure it's 'Nirvana'. At least, I think. Sorta mebbe kinda.

This was an awesome story!

Omg that was awesome... I'm not into shojo-ai/yuri or whatever, but that was actually really cool. It just was. you are an amazing writer and i think i will read everything you write, just because you did. you rock A LOT. *thumbs up*
~shiro!

No wonder Squall's gay. Rinoa is incredibly annoying, selfish little twerp that thinks she can get anything. Like a sugar-coated mothball. Yuck.

Yuffie randomly ringing Aerith in the middle of the night had me giggling. Glad to see she's back to her energetic, go-getter self once more. Nasty of her, torturing poor, conflicted Kairi like she is. I do like how things are evolving slowly, though knowing Yuffie she'll just pounce on an unsuspecting Kairi at the least likely time.

The aroma of a plot? It's lured me in!

~Aqua~

Different from "Suburbia", that's for sure. This be a cutey of a fic and for tackling an unconventional pairing, my hat goes off to you. Not to mention the humour's a welcome change from the normal doom and gloom I find myself drawn into!

From reading your earlier work it's interesting to see how much you've refined your writing. Like, there's a few typos and the style itself is less... I suppose "mature" would be the word. So you've improved. Yeah, that's what us aspiring authors hope to do, ne? ^.^

(On a side note: if you can recall, what version of "Phantom of the Opera" were you reading? I'm going to see the stage show come December and want to get my paws on a copy of the book first.)

~Aqua~

um i have to ask this why is it called rasperry heaven

wow. thank god there are other KH Yuri lovers out there. i had to even google to find this story. nontheless, great.