Aw bummer. This fic hasn't been updated in over three years. :( And it's really good too. I wish you would continue it. Even though I'm not expecting it to happen, I'm adding you to my author alert list.

GAH! So huge problem here. This is an amazingly wickedly brilliant story that is so professionally written.

BUT, it hasn't been updated in THREE bloody years! Tears and sobs! All I'm asking is for you to read some Dyce or some other wonderful Rayne fic and hopefully become inspired to write some more because it is a horrible shame if you don't finish this amazing piece.

Plus, I will die from curiosity and lack of an amazing finish to an equally amazing story!

Toodles, Hermione

This is a lovely follow up to DR. I really hope you'll come back and finish it some day. I liked how you included Monty in this fic. I liked his character a lot.

-Ellie

I love this story so far and I'm looking foward to your next chapter. Please Update Soon!

ahh! SO GOOD! *flails* you cannot leave me in tension like this; please to be updating as soon as you can!

LOVE the river/jayne interaction in this series, you have such a cute way of portraying them, but it's really well though-out. and the character voices are all fantastic- somehow i love simon's the best, actually. bravo! and monty took me by surprise in this chapter. go monty! ^_^

Great story! Any chance of it getting finished?

UPDATE! SOON!

Oh. My. Gosh. This is so good! Like, buy-it-in-paperback-form good. I know what it's like to lose the thread, to leave a story unfinished, but I SO hope something draws you back to finishing this, because I so wanna find out what happens! Great twist with Monty's involvement. Great building of a relationship b/t Jayne and Simon. Everyone's incredibly in character. And yet -- MORE! I want to see River and Jayne finish that bond (wink wink, nudge nudge). I want to see her knit pink baby clothes for THEM! So please come back (and thanks for what you've written so far).

love it love it love it plz plz plz update
zoe

This is a great story. Please update soon.

brilliant story, me likey lots, please continue soon!

So therre going to use a decoy to get them in, isn't that a bit risky i mean then they would have river right where they wanted her

I really like this and hope you continue. Jaryne/River has become a fav. of mine and this fic so far has gone on pretty long compared to others. CONTINUE!

Wonderful, original and brilliant! More please!

Love the story. Please, Please,Please, UPDATE soon!