Very descriptive! I hope you make more fanfics like this! plz do!

Brilliant, amazing, fantstico...I have no words to describe your brilliance except to tell you that immediatly added you to my faves.
~Aly

That was absolutely brilliant! Extremely well done :D

This was very well done! Great job

Your descriptive words are terrific! I'm really envious of your writing ability. But it's good to read fics like these, because it's what I have to learn from.

I'm mostly happy that you have proper grammar and spelling. It's so annoying if there's a good fic where someone can't spell or use any proper punctuation.

XD! Great fic.

Very descriptive. This piece goes very well with the anime. Whenever I watched it, it always came across my mind that something in this nature happened between them. Yet, there was one thing that was a bit convenience: the lubrication tube. This was a rape scene and their meeting was unintentional, therefore why does Muraki carried the lubrication with him; It a bit too convenience, in my opinion.

Yet, thank you for another great piece. I love your writing

very interesting i loved it

OMG, very good and very well written, gave me a good time. *huggles Hisoka* I love you Hisoka-chan!

Wow.You are really great with descriptive language. I also liked the atmosphere that was conveyed and described at the very beginning. This was very well done overall. Good Job. And yes, I read the whole thing. I did not skim any of it. Ha.

Wow. This was very well written. Your details are so good. I really liked the story.

oh! oh! YAOI!
More muraki x hisoka rape plz!
^^ *nods head*
*droolz over hard-coreness of fanfic*
continue to write please!
onegai shimasu! *bows*

That was so goddamn sad! Poor Hisoka!

That was really impressing.. I liked it very much

That was so great that i could'nt have imagined it to happen diffretly...

In short: I LOVED IT!!

Happy newyear!