I'm not really a constructive reviewer type of person but I do know if the story is good!:D hmm..gotenxbra..whatever! Still love it! I'll be loyally waiting for an update,milady!

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just a fan:)

this one is good!
please update :(

I haven't seen GT, but I loved how you portrayed Bra here. Ack, I hope everything turns out okay for her and Goten. Really awesome~ Can't wait for the next chapter.

pls update?

Great story. I really like your characterization of Bra which was quite refreshing not to mention made much more sense than her bimbo personality in GT. I mean c'mon her mother is the CEO of a multinational corporation and her father is the prince of a supposedly superior extraterrestrial race, I find it hard to believe she could grow up to be an airhead in that kind of environment. Anyway it'll be interesting to see how Goten manages to win over Bra, I'm guessing it's not going to be a walk in the park for him (considering he actually has to keep his wits about him and actually WORK to get the girl for once). Keep up the great work, I look forward to your next update!

Oh the tension is mounting and I can feel it! Ahh this story is great and I hope you plan to finish it. It's something that deserves a continuation :)

great job! Looking forward to an update.

Haha this is going to sound hypocritical of me, (since I hardly update my stories anymore) but I truly would love to see an update on this. I enjoyed the read very much and the plot is quite interesting. Keep up the good work!

Much love,
SonChan

i love this story, i liked the way you have done bra and trunks, they seem more like real people than made up fictional character. Favourite part of this story so far is the party, it was funny!

I am so happy i could cry. I found a good bra/goten fic.

Oh...

So he got a date and even a goodbye kiss... that was so great, at least he is wining the bet... But m question is will he do it? will he manage for starters to bed Bra, win the bet and stay alive, because if anyone of her family finds out it is a bet, not only Trunks ass will be grilled by his mother and father but by Bra too. After all he is her older brother he should look put for her not betting her...

And will Goten till the end manage to stay alive... After all he is playing with the princ'e daughter, once known has the demon itself... And if when they were kids he almost got beat up by her father, imagine what he would do now...

But I don't know why they both reacted like that? well Vegeta was looking after his daughter, but isn't a girl biggest dream to have her brother best freidn roposing... I guess it isn't! In Bra's case...

I can't wait to read your next chapter...

Good job with this fic. Excellent, really. It could definitely become something great if you keep it up. Depending on which way you decide to go with the plot and such. The character building is so good, you could probably go almost anywhere with it. I hope you update soon. Until the next chapter.

~Makoto~

Oh, wow! You're back!!

I loved this chapter! It was cute, seeing the interaction between Bra and Goten grow. Ohh, he's starting to fall for her! How CUTE!! LOL! And *gasp*! What will he make?!? ^.^

Hey, about your AN:
The alerts do work . . . well, I received one for the update (although I am aware of the fact that the update has been posted for a while . . . sorry about that!)

But, you know, if you do not think that the readers are actually receiving these alerts, you could always start a mailing list: You know, have them provide their e-mail, and when you Update, you send the a type of "alert".

Well, I think I've bothered you enough. Can not wait for the next UPDATE (the sooner, the better *hint**hint* . . .LOL! JK). Ciao!

~LunaBela

Don't worry, I'm definitely still following this story. That scene at the end was cute and romantic. I liked this chapter, even if you didn't so much. I wish I could write something more productive in here, lol, but it's 3:03 AM and I'm about to go to bed. Hope the next chapter comes out sooner! Keep up the great work!

once again...fabulous job with this chapter. ive been waiting for this story to continue for a while and im glad you wrotethis so amazingly (thats a word, right?). anyways...plz continue soon

Whoa. Great chapter and I'm glad to see you updating. I whole heartedly believe this story is never going to fall dead. I'm going to go check out some of that music! (Especially Maaya Sakamoto. I'm still in love with her "Cries in the Dark" song)