really cute ^.^♥

Good story, except for the one or two grammatical errors i found. Also, pork okonomiyaki? that's rich!

one question: are you using the word jackass as a substitute for the word BAKA? If so, which I somehow doubt, the word BAKA can also mean idiot, depending upon what region of Japan it is being used in.

ohh this is cute and im real glad that there's
actually a chapter 2 to go with this

and i loved this thought
"Would she offer pork okonomiyaki to him?"
haha

brings a little happiness to my world too ^^

love Ukyo and Ryoga stories

Very sweet and touching. Like it!

First, sorry for my lousy english! But i am an german native speaker and understand more than i can write...
I like this story, because it is a "maybe" and there is hope. I am also a great fan of Ryoga and Ukyo and this is a very good ending/new beginning for both...
Greetings
Saraton

Aw...That was sweet. ^_^ I liked it. It's too bad this is a one-shot, cause a sequel where Ryoga comes back would be really sweet. ^_^ Great job though! Ciao for now!