Good! Very well done

Love it, love it, love it! A neat look at Suguru. I find this really deep. Just the way Aya acts, you know that she has issues, and the way Suguru reacts to her ... it`s really beautiful.
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//Aya winked at her son when he was gone and extended the cup to him. "Here you go. They wouldn’t have served you, you’re not a patient here, but I know how to get around that."//
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This part really gets to me, how she acts so natural and conspiratorial ... you know?
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The best part, in my opinion, is the water. The fact that it`s lukewarm and stale realy seals the whole situation.
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I have NO artiulation, today, I wish I could give a better review! Great story, great look at Suguru. General greatness!

Poor Suguru Y_Y
I like the way you wrote this...the description of the nurse, and of their surroundings in the hospital. The behaviour of his mother was well done, I think.