Ok I have to say that this really touched my heart. That you have a skill that I have never seen before. You have to write another chapter. You don't have to but it would be nice. I loved it so much. I hope you write more storys like this. That is all I have to say. ¿_¿

i love the descriptions. i love the intense detail and many metaphors. but im unsure, is this going to continue? please do. i really enjoyed reading this.

I love it! I think its beautiful! Was that Angemon and Angewomon who came and all?
You HAVE to continue! Please! Or maybe it should stay as it is, its prefect! I love it, you're fantasitic!

great story just a bit muddled at times but apart from that really good please review my ellas conquest series thanks bye!