 Lady Elizabeth 2004-06-04 . chapter 1Nicely done. |
 Brennan's Angel 2004-04-29 . chapter 1AW... I love your stories excellent you should make more but even longer ones. I love Brennan and Shalimar there asome. Plus I love Romantic Stories. |
 ameriker 2004-04-25 . chapter 1great job! keep up the good work! |
 gracienalanii 2004-04-25 . chapter 1OMG I've tried to review this thing five times on silvermoonstar's board, but it's not working for some reason. So I came over here to review!
I really really liked this story! Its very cute and exactly how I've pictured them being if they ever got together. And I loved their make up. It was so sweet. I hope you write more about this kind of thing because I realy enjoyed it.
And btw, I have a new website: http://com4.runboard.com/bwelcometomutantx
-Nalaniangel |
 viviana 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 Sorry for the delay! Stil, I would never miss reviewing one of your great stories! After all you are my favorite writer!
So this story is amzing as always! I loved so much the fact that you used all the basic Shal and Bren features and still they show that they are so in love with each other! I loved that pharse with : "maybe it is a feral thing" and I loved the two options they had! Of course, Shalimar would never go for the easy one! The idea of them gettin upset with each other over something they don't even remeber lately is a greta one because you revealed more something of their temperaments and characters! And you did it amazingly! And it is amazing what they ended up doing starting with a breakfast:)!! Very nice indeed!
In briefly I loved it very very much and I am expecting more to read! Maybe two stories every week?:) Maybe more?
Always love reading your stories! You are an REAL Shal/Bren fan and this can be noticed from your stories!
Viviana |
 nat 2004-04-15 . chapter 1 wow great s/b fic! nice for a quick read after a long boring day of school. please write more s/b fics soon! |
 MariShal 2004-04-14 . chapter 1 I told you, this was a great fanfic :-)
I love it now! You are one of my favorite S&B writers. So please write more S&B just the way we love them :-) |
 garfieldlady 2004-04-12 . chapter 1You post it!
I really love this story! Funny and childish!
Great job!! Hugs! |
 Nautica7mk 2004-04-12 . chapter 1*whistling* I shouldn't be grinning like this at work, but that was just too cute and sexy. :) Great job! |
 brennan mulwray 2004-04-12 . chapter 1lol! great fic! love B/S! nice job, and write some more stuff! :D :D :D |
 Fiery Feral 2004-04-12 . chapter 1 That was so cute! I loved it! Great job! =D |
 mfkngst 2004-04-12 . chapter 1this was so cute! much better then some of those really fluffy ones out there. This had the fun, the romance, the fluffy, and the substance of a good story. I relly loved jesse tring to sleep, and thinking "not again" It was so cute! i loved it. and if your bored you could always do a Lexa/Jesse story...*wink, wink*nudge, nudge* |
 Rain 2004-04-12 . chapter 1ROTFLMAO..this was wonderful! The character interaction was true to form and perfect!! Great story and great use of eggs :) |
 blackpanther2288 2004-04-12 . chapter 1I LOVE this story! It's so cute! And fluffy. :Dd Exactly the way i like S/B. Can't wait for the next story. Could you try something similar with Jesse and Emma? |
 fireferal 2004-04-12 . chapter 1 Conquers, you *rule*! Awesome fic! |