"He was broken by his parents disregard long ago, and has learned his lessons well."

Love it. I'm just now watching Enterprise after the fact, as it's playing in syndication here, and I wish I had actually watched it while it was on. I love your story.

aw...wow...I have a thing for last lines, and this one is beautiful. Since you like SS/HG

Wonderful! You capture Reed and Hoshi with the most astonishing clarity. Utterly beguiling.

I love your characterization of Malcolm; really looking forward to reading more of your ENT fiction!

I've read you're CSI stories, and I was so (pleasently) surprised when I found you're writing for Enterprise too, and for one of my favourite couples! I love this story, and hope you write more!

Very nice. I like it.

This is so poetic and beautiful! You paint such vivid images with just a few words. I totally love comptempplative!Malcolm - this is gorgeuos.