|Reviews for Strays|
| woahhhnelly 10/18/09 . chapter 1
YOU ARE MY HERO.
i was reading your harry potter fictions, when i came across these on your profile and almost fell to the ground worshipping you.
i thought i would never find a writer who wrote both star trek and harry potter fics! 3
| XD 7/19/08 . chapter 1
aw...I love the parallel hoshi draws between malcolm and a stray dog. It's VERY suitable!
| reed's girl 3/22/07 . chapter 1
"She can read between the lines - or in this case, the muscles and sinews - to his very heart."
Love the imagery.
| Chriss Corkscrew 1/2/05 . chapter 1
Oh god! You got me again! Utterly poignant and delicious!
| Dolly 4/15/04 . chapter 1
Very sweet, nice to see it from Hoshi's perspective.
| soultoast 4/14/04 . chapter 1
This is very nice. You are starting to capture the essences of the characters. However, your Malcolm seems a bit colder than he does on the show. He is friendly with Trip, so you might want to address this.
| anonymous 4/12/04 . chapter 1
Very good story. I especially loved the Hoshi's comparison of Malcolm and the stray dog she brought home as a child. Also the last line, that she's as lonely as he is. I look foreward to reading more of your work.
| HoshiReed fan 4/12/04 . chapter 1
Again, short but sweet. I love the parellels you draw here between Malcolm and Hoshi's much-loved stray. For someone unfamiliar with gentleness and emotion, I agree that Malcolm would react with caution and distrust.
Also loved this line: "It's a conditioned response, like the fabled Pavlov dogs."
I suppose in a few centuries the story of Pavlov's Dogs would seem almost mythical.