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Devilish
2004-04-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was very good. Only one minor mistake: no one does not have a dash. Other than that, you have a great one-shot. Congratulations.
-Devilish
--Devilish4@aol.com
C.L. Curtis
2004-04-13
ch 1,
abuseCan I just say that this was wonderful? Wonderfully written. Kate was wonderfully in character. And YOU are a wonderful writer. I'll leave a longer review via eamil, as I have to go now.
Good job,
~Chrysti
Texas Volcano
2004-04-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery good. Nicely done; you have a concept of grammar, spelling and formatting.
You should try a hand at Holes one-shots more often.
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