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| Devilish 2004-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very good. Only one minor mistake: no one does not have a dash. Other than that, you have a great one-shot. Congratulations. -Devilish --Devilish4@aol.com |
| C.L. Curtis 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseCan I just say that this was wonderful? Wonderfully written. Kate was wonderfully in character. And YOU are a wonderful writer. I'll leave a longer review via eamil, as I have to go now. Good job, ~Chrysti |
| Texas Volcano 2004-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. Nicely done; you have a concept of grammar, spelling and formatting. You should try a hand at Holes one-shots more often. |