Nice story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

i really like the story so far..i like the way ur going with this...continue writing...ur a GREAT AUTHOR!! (i think i wrote that in another review of ur stories...oh well...i mean what i say) so what if its mary-sueish...i mean..a lot of ppl right about mary-sues...but urs in this story seem unique in their own way..CONTINUE WRITING!! don't come out like alot of those authors who don't finish their stories and leave the ppl reading them on cliff hangers!

Um a marysue is like a perfect character that never does anything to embarrass themselves in my opinion.(sorry bout the spelling) They`re the character you get sick of hearing about, too. BUt I love this story. Thank you for posting another chapter! And I am also horrible at math!That song was funny! PLEASE UPDATE THIS!

noone else is aloud to insult Bud ok!? ORR ILL GET YA! ... rar.! :D love u !
:D

i dont like it, i dont really like ur stories, there kinda crap. sorry. bye.

hey Kitchen, its Hilza. You were right m8, im loving this story. glad to see the guitar rift got in there somewhere! Just something i picked up, there's a few grammar mistakes mostly in the 2nd chapter, up to u if you want to check it out. It's only little things but i know what you're like with perfection Tinuviel. Just be careful that i don't get too boring with all my serene elfiness cos near the end im startin to loose my bird humouor (heehee). and i agree with the last (i think it was) review about maybe updating every week because this story is col. (still jammin to MJ, oh and keanu thinks that kitchen is fit!! u know what that means right?)
Anyway, PLEASE write some more! i like the change in Legolas, it's quite surprising because most people put him in as a really nice guy so seeing his evil robot legolas (bill and ted) persona is refreshing and original. Go for it girl.
Luv (the original) Vikki x

Don`t tell me your going to be an author who never finishes a good story?

hello officer
you work is cool keep it going
heres a word from the wise : try to do one chapter a week for ongoing stories that way your audience wont get bored and stop reading them, theyll be eating out of your hand waiting for the installent in a weeks time

Cool story so far, but one ? about the future of the story. Aragorn, Legolas, Elladan, and Elrohir aren't 15 all at the same time. Elladan and Elrohir might come close, being brothers and all, but not exactly.
-your impressed and confused fan

Hey, i want to read about Middle-Earth. Come on! I want you to continue!!
-Elfobsession2931 :)

Ugh. This is going to be a Mary-Sue...a double MS, mind you. Also, you can't have author's notes as chapters. Fanfiction.net might take this down for that, so I suggest you remove this, combine the not and chapter into 1 chapter with a note, and then repost it. Um...just one other thing. Remember that the characters are different ages. Elladan & Elrohir are 1 years older than Arwen, so how could they be 15 at the same time? When they were 15, Aragorn wasn't even born! Please do some serious research before you start a story.
~Delia