Awesome! I would rather have seen Magneto as Rochelieu and Pyro or Sabretooth as Rochefort, but this works well too. Who is elisabeth supposed to be? I don't remember a mutant with that name. I love how you made her more than a helpless woman though.

This could be interesting... I don't agree with your Scott-and-Prof. bashing, but the story could still be great. Of course, I can't really judge it based on one chapter... *hint hint*

cool idea! hope you'll continue =)

Muy interesante. I haven't seen many Longshot fics, but I can see it working. Figures Warren and Betsy would be the king and queen. :P Scott as the guy with one eye, how fitting. And I can see Xavier as the bad guy. Question: Will Dazzler be the queen's aid that D'Artanion (sp??) falls for. AND who will be Remy's wife?? Rogue or Belle (or someone else, like Ororo, but I'm not really a fan of that pairing). If it's Rogue, it works with the whole Longshot thingy (canon fun), when she seduces him... but it also fits with Bella Donna's character. The bad part (if it's Rogue, at least) is that she dies. That part always made me cry in the movie. Wasn't Kiefer Sutherland hot?? Charlie Sheen too!! :P Anyway, great start!! I love the idea. Update SOON plz!! Adios.
-- Caliente
a.k.a. Lexi

You caught my attention with ease. i look forward to reading the rest of the story. I hope you update soon!

Wah! Wanna see the rest! how did u dare to cut the story there? Logan-Porthos, wanna see it, XD. Who will be bernadette.. Dazzler? I'm wishing to see the next chapters as soon as possible... YAY!