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Katlin Grace 2008-10-02 . chapter 3
Ok, so this is a great start, but where is the rest of the story?!?! I want to read more! I know that it's been years since this chappy, but they were too short. Surely you've got another one. I liked it a lot. Trunks and Usa are my favorite pair. Hope to read more!

Katlin Grace
Serenity Moon2 2008-09-19 . chapter 3
This story is interesting. I can't remember if I've ever read a fic that had Usagi paired up with future Trunks. For some reason I want to say that I haven't seen it like that before. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Princesa de la Luna 2006-12-23 . chapter 3
hi this chapter was really good and i liked it very much. i can't wait what happens next. keep up the good work. bye until next time please update thank you.

ps: please don't give up on this story thanks again.
MoonFace01 2006-03-25 . chapter 3
wow...i normally don't read DBZ/SM crossovers, but this has got me hooked! i hope you update and continue writing, i luv it!
xamethyst-rosex 2005-12-20 . chapter 1
*ahem* Azraelya-sama, this is among the greatest T/U fan fics I have read so far. It's unique, and original, and just down-right sweet (aaww Trunks ^_^). YOU MUST UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! *puppy dog eyes* I'm wondering what Chibi-Usa knows?? And what Usagi is going tell them? What about when it's time for Trunks to go back to the future, will Usagi be going with him!? Or will she stay some place safe from the androids until he returns? What about the other senshi!? And Mamoru? I'm so glad this going to be a T/U fic! Although it's sweet how Usa-chan is staying faithful to Mamoru...for now XD *heart melts* I REALLY HOPE YOU READ THIS REVIEW YOU HAVE TO UPDATE I'M GOING IN SANE @_@ I'll even draw you some fan art for it! o.o!!

~Seri-chan
Saris Yui 2005-12-15 . chapter 3
Can I just say I love your stories and this one is no exception. trunks must have really missed his Usagi to have the nerve to kiss a girl twice in the same day after she slaped him silly. If I'm not mistaking also looking like he wanted to run the bases as well?*giggles* What kind of girl is Usagi going to be the same or is she going change and have a slightly diff personality? I don't know what your going to do so I decided to ask. Man I love Trunks his lavender hair is sexy! Well I hope i hope I see more!
Saris Yui
Yuzuki 2005-11-05 . chapter 3
UPDATE!
xamethyst-rosex 2005-10-23 . chapter 3
OMG! I'm in love with this story! *gasp* YOU HAVE TO UPDATE IT SOON! PLEASE! T/U all the way ^_^
Serenity Usagi Malfoy 2005-10-16 . chapter 2
I love Usa/Trunks fics are much as I love Usa/Draco fics! You have to update this! please?
Serenity Usagi Malfoy 2005-10-16 . chapter 3
Ah! You have to update this one too!! @_@
Flame Ivy Moon 2005-09-26 . chapter 3
I love it please up date asap!
Himeko Sorano 2005-07-10 . chapter 3
Aww... how sweet, Trunks is in love with Usagi! But she has Mamoru and I'm sure pain, confusion and hilarity will ensue! Seems promising...I'll read it if you decide to finish it.
cosmicsorrow 2005-07-05 . chapter 3
I'm bored so I'm rereading some of your stuff (or reading for the 1st time) and reviewing if I haven't yet. Are you ever going to come up with another chapters? :p
Danni the elf 2005-04-25 . chapter 3
Good story so far cant wait for next chapter.
Jboogs Boo 2005-03-05 . chapter 3
THIS WUZ GREAT! I LUV'D IT
But the question still lies...how many bubbles are in a bar of soap?(you've gotten me stuck on that) Get more chappy's out NOW!
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