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| La Llorona 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLoTR with humor - excellent! Let your wit flow long. As a sarcastic old B%!*$ I enjoyed these! |
| CrystalFNfire 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseHaha... very inventive. I love it. Please continue. I love deranged and funny LotR poems. |
| Satara 2004-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI love the first poem, 'for trees cannot walk like you and me' hehehehehehe :-D |
| Brandywine 2004-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have never read Keats so I wouldn´t know the difference. ;) I love the Orc´s Promenade, it´s *good*. Funny too. And the Ode to the Shire is very pretty. This is my favorite part: "..lands distant and lands more far, my heart burns not to ken what they are.." |
| Crystal-Hope 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuselol! Funny and light. They were a bit awquard at times, the ryming sometimes seemed a little forced. Cute poems, keep writing! |
| Creepy-Gollum 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseVery funny!! Keep writing more! I loved the first poem. |
| Daughter of Olorin 2004-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved these! The Ode to the Shire was nicely written. The Promenade Through Fangorn was hilarious! "Too late"-ha, ha! Shel Silversteinitis? :) Good job. Bring on any more "pithy items" you come up with! |