Dude. Great story you wrote here. The human race IS kinda stupid like that...
Just curious-When will you work on the Halo/Gundam crossover? You're re-writing The Rise, Fall, and rebirth of teh phoenix, but that may take quite a while.
I wish there were more authors liek you who A) wrote great long stories (only took me 2 hours to finish it all-ch.1-25, but I read fast!) adn B) Those had a good message.
Thak you for your time.
SqurielLord.

I know it's been a while since I've reviewed, but I've been busy...anyway, on to the show.

"Once the weapons had been loaded on the Phoenix Gundam, Jake and Kyle were using the Internet to find the locations of the SOZ bases. "

The Internet? The SOZ would just let valuable information like that get out so easily? I'm sorry, but that's really hard to believe.

The overall story is still pretty good, but it doesn't seem like you're focusing on characters quite enough. The past few chapters have been rebuilding the Phoenix and random fights, it seems. Then again, my fic is pretty character heavy, so maybe it's just my perception. Anyway, keep on chugging.

It's been a long time since my last review, eh? Between school getting ready to start back up, the summer reading assignment, my own fic, and so much more it seems like I have hardly any time.

Well, things keep happening in your fic. This anti-Phoenix Gundam is quite a development. It's rare that an army makes a MS specifically to counter on suit, but it has happened. There was an anti-Crossbone Gundam suit, and anti-V2 Gundam suit, the Virgos from wing could be considered anti-Gundam, and that's all I can think off the top of my head. Anyway, I'll try to find time to read some more of it.

Damn is this the end! If it was it was a very great ending for a great series and I hope you contoune it or somthing! I guess I was wrong about the Scavangers from the Vulture Colony did not make an appearance in the final battle. I take it that Jake and Layla have joined Amuro and Char wereever they are! I hope you keep writing for you are a great writer and I hope you soon gradute to Fictionpress. Anyways thanks for this great read and keep it coming!

Well, I always knew that the finale would be a wild one, but I never guessed a supernatural ending. It makes me going like "What the...?" and "Wait a minute, what's that again?" a number of times before finally get a firm grip of what's going on. This is certainly the most difficult chapter I've ever read in Phoenix trilogy.
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But then, it paid off really nicely. I can go for hours exulting this chapter, but let me just say this: If I have time only to read 1 chapter of the entire Phoenix trilogy, this is the one that I'll spend my time with. I can guess what happened before this, but I will never guess anything in this chapter.
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And Jonah is a poor, sympathetic character, a man in the wrong place at the wrong time. He is the "beta child" after Vergil, he is born a SOZ, he can't get the girl he wants, and his life ends miserably in the hands of his own father. He can break the world record for the most "sorry-**" man ever lived. But I still like him, and I like the way he died for what he believed. Every classic story always has this type of character, and I'm glad I find one in here.
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The final oration from Jake and Layla for the human race is somewhat... what can I say... naive. It's human nature to go to war. It's human nature to destroy its own home. Nothing can ever change that, not even Jake and Layla in their godly form. It might be more realistic if Jake and Layla just smite the bejesus out of Damien, instead of addressing the human race to stop fighting. However, I will not argue with you over this. Anything can happen in your imagination, and I will treasure that.
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I think I talked too much. I salute you for this magnificent work, and I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavor.

Wow...an amazing story. If I were a movie critic and this were a motion picture series, I'd give this movie 5 stars! Well done Firebird! I applaud your excellent story.

Well...this is it, the final battle to end the war. It's obvious Layla and Jake made love but I'm sure everyone guessed that. But now, it's time for the SOZ and NF to do what their ancestors had done over a couple hundred years ago. It's time to end this once and for all. RISE NOW PHOENIX GUNDAM!

Sweet Firebird! This chapter was the best builder chapter I have read in a long time! Keep up the good work!

Wow...imagine if that really happened. You really know how to detail the results if mankind doesn't stop fighting.

Well, I guess Amuro and Char haven't changed and they keep speaking in riddles to Layla and Jake. Keep it coming man.

Damn here I thought that Jack would take Layla to the Vulture Colony since earlier in the fic to their Gundams upgraded by Max. But I do have a feeling that the Vulture and Company when plan a part later on! :) Anyways good chapter and please keep this up!

I swear man, you should sign up at w.gundamwatch.com/invision and post all three of your Phoenix Gundam stories there. I'm sure everyone will like this, I know I do.

Dude, you should sign up to Gundamwatch.com. I think they'd like your Pheonix stories and you just might impress them.

this is the best UC fanfic i've red. the characters are interesting. Clarke reminds me of Bask Om from Zeta gundam, and thats a compliment. i mean it's easy to do heros, but it's tough to create a believeable vllian. the whole killing a commanding officer threw me for a lupe. never seen that happen from the protagonist. i wonder what his punishment will be? that is if he doesnt perish on the battlefield. anyways good job.

The way you coreograph the battle scene is... I have no words for that. I've never been able to do it. If I concentrate on details, my battle scene moves like a slow motion. But if I concentrate on the intensity, my battle scene moves fast but lacks of detail. You manage to blend those two elements perfectly. Maybe you have to teach me your secret recipe someday.