what do you mean with that? ah well never mind answering that question, i'll just read the sequel. ^_^ i really liked the story. :-) you're a really good writer.

The long-lost daughter of Joyleaf and Bearclaw, trapped in human form on Earth who just happens to be an ElfQuest fan? Let's see...in the beginning, you introduce yourself first with the human name Katty Moon, you fall in love with Skywise, and you have powers of the moon, not to mention having a wolfbond with the daughter of Blackfell...to me, this spells out Mary Sue. And when you've rewritten the original Quest and made it center around MoonSue...this does not make me happy. Especially not when there's bad grammar/spelling involved, and it's not deliberate (meaning that you would write the way some people speak).

great story! if you don't continue, then i'll die. more! more!more! my sister loves it and so do my friends!

that was a kick ass story i will read the next story !

i like your story!

Hey Starfall88 ^-^

A really cool story you made here, I can't wait for you to continue the story of Moonfell/Katty Moon^-^ Good twist too, by the way^-^

I've been reading it for months now and really would like it if you came up with the rest of the story, but I understand writers block and since I've yet to come up with a story of my own, I'm not the one who should talk ;c)

Shade and sweet water to you,

Luna Moonlight/Fawn

P.S. There were some writing errors, but nothing major, it was understandable and that's what's count, right? ^-^

its pretty good, but no! you cant have her beat Cutter at swordhandling! thast unspeakable!! Cutter is like the coolest ever (sigh) promise me you wont do it again, okay!?

hehe, Cutters hot;) nyah!

This story is cool!

Hi,
I just wanted to say that I love your story and I think it is interesting. I can't wait till you write more. The only thing is you have grammar mistakes, but then again you must be on a roll and keep the chapters coming.

oh i liked this story. you should read mine. i have two elfquest ones up. the girl with out a soul name. elfquest:the world of two moons.

wOOt wOOt! Awesome story! Very cool ending! I luved it! But I really really hope there's a sequel. I didn't come on for awhile cuz of school, then it was too far back on my review history to remind me. I just found it bu looking at a bunch of random people's favs. ^_^ And I'm so glad I did!

Byez 4 Nowz
Crecy

i really enjoyed reading your story, and i hope that you post its secound part soon.

-gryffyn

That was a cool chapter! I hope you do make a new story to add on to this one!

Heh heh. She has a soul name now. Cool.

A good chapter! Please update again as soon as possible!