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Sutoomu
2006-04-19 . chapter 1
This is a pretty interesting fantasy fic. different from others ive read. i think ill keep on reading it!

Storm
Trevor X
2006-04-12 . chapter 11
I'm crying. It's finished.

And yet, the story still goes on. At least, that's what I feel.
nobody
2006-04-04 . chapter 11
WOW! that was one really good story! Good job on chapter 12 by the way. Wish it was longer but I always wish that at the end of any story. Keep up the excellent writing.
RedLion2
2006-04-02 . chapter 11
Starlight, I just loved it. It was a nice and simple epilogue, but it told everything that needed to be told. Heero's impatience at Relena's lack of anger is hitting his personality on the mark. And his whispering back to Relena the words she had said was sweet and sufficent.

You wrote a beautiful story, and I'm sorry that it hasn't gotten more reviews. It definitely deserves them. Looking forward to everything else you have planned! RedLion2
Trevor X
2006-03-27 . chapter 10
Good job! For sticking it out through an intense period of writer's block, and actually achieving such a good chapter, I award you the "Endurance Award".

Beautifully done!
tyleet88
2006-03-18 . chapter 10
:O man it's over..well darn..I really liked this story, you did a real good job I hope to see more of your work and I bet it will be even better ..keep up the writing.
RedLion2
2006-03-18 . chapter 10
Starlight,

Your chapter was amazing. I think the battle scenes between Ha'derkaath and Wufei were well-written, and the images made it very easy to see it in my mind. Wufei transforming into the platinum form was a nice touch to the scene.

I was glad to see everyone returned to their normal states after the battle had ended. I wondered if Catherine would be shown out of her hawk form (and I LOVE the fact that she was a hawk. I think hawks are so amazing!). All the characters were true to themselves from the show, and yet definitely more dimensional and real in your story.

And I'm glad the lifebond cannot be severed. I was hoping Heero and Relena would have to stay bound, even though she will die when he does. I mean, she wouldn't want it any other way, and neither would he.

You are an amazing writer, and have become a great friend as well. Thank you for your own encouragement of all my GW endeavors. RL2
Trevor X
2006-02-01 . chapter 9
"Then he began to sing."

GREATEST CHAPTER ENDING YET! I kid you not, it sent shivers up my spine. Wow. I'm so proud of you!
shad0w118
2006-01-28 . chapter 9
interesting story. but some loop holes i dun understand. at the begining Duo and Heero are serving Ha'deraath? then change sides? y did Heero have the necklace supposed given to him by Ha'derkaath. but i like your story all the same. update soon.
RedLion2
2006-01-27 . chapter 9
Short, but oh so good, Starlight. I liked the fight, and I wonder what will happen now that Quatre has been freed from his stay in the sword. I like how Heero reached for and kept Relena close to his side, protecting her. I wonder, what was she concentrating on? Defeating Ha'derkaath? And I JUST love that name. Powerful and evil. What a great story this is! Thank you for sharing it with us...RL2
RedLion2
2006-01-12 . chapter 6
Wow, Starlight. Awesome. This is the best GW fantasy fic out there, anywhere. I love the interaction between all the characters, and how they all fit into the story. Wufei as a dragon is a menacing thought, and I can't wait to see him as the Guardian he truly is. And Heero's grudging acceptance of his lifebond with Relena is very IC for him. I love this story! RL2
ZmajGoddess
2005-01-17 . chapter 6
interesting story...im looking forward to the next chapter! update soon!
Lady MR1
2005-01-14 . chapter 5
Very interesting, I hope you continue this story soon.
Angeltearz49
2004-09-16 . chapter 5
its a very compelling story u got goin. hopin to see more of it soon.
koriaena
2004-07-08 . chapter 5
immortals with an attitude. *snickers* ^^ good story. im guessing duo lost his powers for a reason? what exactly where his powers? why were he and heero traveling together? good story! ^.^ i really like it!
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