 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 9Sweet, keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 8Sweet, keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 7Sweet, keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 6Sweet, keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 5Sweet, keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 4Sweet, keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 3sweet, please keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 2sweet, please keep it up. |
 BlackBaccaraRose 2007-12-19 . chapter 1sweet, please keep it up. I love Marle/Frog pairings ^_^ |
 loves-winged-dark-angel 2005-09-13 . chapter 9love it, keep it up and update more often |
 Bloodshy Testament 2005-07-06 . chapter 9Beautiful!! Another Chapter awesomely written. You had a bit of a comma problem, I noticed... not enough of them, where they should be. But you definately made up for it with the breathtaking imagery in the battle scene, marvalous! I await the next chapter on the edge of my seat...
~The Bloodshy Testament |
 Meushell 2005-05-06 . chapter 9It took me this long to realize you updated. I thought you abandoned the story, so I stopped checking. Nice effect the magic has on them. Remember, Flea followed them around in bat form before they fought him. (In the game it makes it fun to fight Slash first because then Flea basically sat there and watched Slash lose.) If you are going to take so long to update, you should at least make the chapters longer. Hmm, if Frog can't double or triple his techs here, does that include using the sword while another char uses his/her weapon of choice? |
 Triffid 2004-11-20 . chapter 9Wow! I really, really, really like this story. It's very well written! I hope you update soon, it's fantastic so far! |
 Mystical Jade 2004-06-26 . chapter 8Ooh, I love that scene in the game... Along with the music - awesome! The fight through the castle should prove interesting. And also, what Spekkio expects of Glenn took me by surprise, a little! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. |
 Bloodshy Testament 2004-06-22 . chapter 8This is an awesome ficcie!! I love it- keep on going! The only real problem I have with it is Frog's speech... he really sounds less shakespeareian in this than in the game, but that'
s fine. I know it's hard to get that midevil thing... I hate it. Other wize, lovin' it!!
~Bloodshy Testmant~ |