 Sprite3 2008-08-31 . chapter 1Interesting story about a character we have never seen! I, for one, always wondered what really happened to Diego's mother, as McCulley never mentioned how she passed away.
I especially liked the ending of this story, and the hint at the secret passage that Zorro uses so much :) Cute wink. |
 IcyWaters 2008-07-21 . chapter 1This is a delightfully written tale that immediately drew me into its world. I am very impressed by your writing style; the formal structure added to the authenticity of the journal entries. It felt as though I stumbled across this in a dusty archive.
Isabella de la Vega was a remarkable character. I really enjoyed learning about Alejandro and Diego through her eyes. She had such keen observations in regard to her son. It makes me wonder what Diego’s life would have been like had she still been alive when he returned from Spain. It was heartbreaking the way her last entry trailed off.
Even though this was posted over seven years ago, thank you so much for sharing it. :-) |
 SunRise19 2006-10-27 . chapter 1This was a very sweet sad however wonderful piece of writing! I've been looking for Disney Zooro fics, not the fam ones that dominate the Zorro catigory. I've always loved the Disney tv show, I miss it being on the Disney channel.
Thanks so much for writing this, it was beautiful and brilliant! |
 aslan-chic 2005-04-10 . chapter 1I like this particularly for it's orginality. Very sad and prophetic. I would enjoy to see other works from you.
Pax. |
 Bunny 2001-06-17 . chapter 1 cool! really goes with the series, I like! |
 lillycatt 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 This story is really beautiful! It's so sweet, and sad at the end. P.S. Guy Williams is definitely the best Zorro! :] |
 Bill Fowler 2001-06-06 . chapter 1 This author need not worry about "ego". Good word usage and an enviably formal style that is in context. Romantic! |
 Tammy 2001-05-26 . chapter 1 Wow, Jena, this is great! How you captured three lives all in one sweep is very impressive! And the end was very touching, how she just stopped...great writing! =) |
 Rendia 2001-05-02 . chapter 1 Oh, this is sad... I like it though, it was very well-written. Good job |
 Britt 2001-04-14 . chapter 1 omg, that was so sad. but it was beautifully written. keep up the good work! |
 wendy 2001-03-20 . chapter 1 this was very cute and well-written.
i loved hearing from Diego's mother and the idea of her writing letters expressing her love for her family.
wouldn't she know about the passages though?
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 RenaissanceGrrl 2001-03-06 . chapter 1aww...that was so sweet I almost cried at the end! |
 tpk757 2001-02-02 . chapter 1Wow. Very Good. |
 Scroll Keeper 2001-01-21 . chapter 1I had seen this story somewhere before, but it was nice to read it again. I love the letter format and how Isabella expressed her feelings for the two important persons in her life. Great job. :) |