I really liked the story, I think you captured their personalities perfect. This is my second time reading it. (Little Marie is so cute!) You should do another one.

Hmm! If Kurt and Rogue really were 17 at the end of the show in 2004, the story cannot take place in 1984 if Rogue really was 4 at the time of the story. It should take place in 1991.

And I doubt that Cain Marko got the ruby from Magneto.

But the rest of the story is good enough.

Yay...that rocked...you know i don't think enough people try to explore the relationship between Mystique/Destiny...and well their little girl. Well done. Gold star.

That was great. I liked Irene's getting pissed off at Raven for leaving her for so long. Mystique/Destiny is such an unappreciated pairing. If you like this pairing you might like my fic "Forever", it's Destiny's POV on Mystique's death.

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Too many good things, but let me see if I can't name a couple of them. First of all, loved Mystique's POV. She's really underplayed in Evo and in fanfiction and its good to see her portrayed as something other than a snake-tongued, two-faced bitch or some sappy forgiveness-seeking mother. It was a pleasant mix of the two. Loved of course the interaction between Irene, Raven and Agatha. Very nice take on their meetings and/or re-meetings. Loved kiddie Rogue. The batman PJ's were what really sold her to me, of course. The lone superhero. Cute. And oh so much more, too much to mention here.
Keep up the good work.