i love ur story thank you for writing it plz come bacy to it soon the fight between naruto and hinata was really cool and naruto is finally losing the sexist aditude which i'm im sorry to say has been bothering me for a while

i've always hated additudes like that and glare and punch/kick anyone who tries to give me that crap brother and dad included

i really hope u aren't like that normally
if u aren't thank you
if u are (evil eye)

ja ne

-shadow

^.^ That was AWESOME!

>.< *sigh* Having Sasuke use the Kage Bunshin was unrealistic. For one thing, the technique creates clones that have an equal amount of chakra divided among them. That means that even with one clone, Sasuke's chakra would be cut in half, and that's AFTER the fire techniques and the chakra lost while using the Sharingan. This is the reason behind the Kage Bunshin's rating as a Jounin level technique. Only ninjas with Jounin chakra levels (or higher) can use it properly. Obviously Naruto can use it easily because of his TWO enormous sets of chakra to draw from.

^.^ I'm liking it so far! Keep up the great work!

I love your story. It's cute, and I like the way you don't alienate the characters, or make them jerks, like most people. arigato!
jordy

cool

UPDATE SOON

that was an AWSOME fight

My impression is... he's a jerk.

The kanji on Jiraiya's forehead protector means "oil".

great

great plot so far please update soon

Why have you shown Naruto as weak? Apparently he could beat Jiraiya . . . This stuff doesn't make sense at all.

Very interesting story
I love Naruto's peep talk to Hinata. And I love the 'sharing of jutsus'.
I know this is on hold, but if you decide you continue it I would love to read it. It is definally an original story and has good charateristion. But I also understand writer's block (since I have it now...)

WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!