I know you're probly getting tired of me but too bad^^. I loved the angst in this poem and again the structure. I have a thing with evil and depressing poetry. This is the fourht poem I've read of yours and the fourth reveiw I've submitted...I have lots of time to kill^^; can you tell!! ttfn! Keep up the good work!!

nicely done..^^

terrific! it's so sad, and deep, yet so true. you're such a talented poet. can't wait to read more.
keep writing, and laughing,

-DKR

this was great

yeah, dark and evil and stuff. I liked it!

Oh, so sad, I love it, and it is not evil or dark or whatever, its sad and very good! Now you just have to write more, 'cause you got me hooked! If you wanna chat or something you can email me at blairn1@zoomnet.net well, bye, I is goin' to read your other stories now because you are an awesome writer!

The poem wasn't eviL! It was great! But a little disturbing...>_< But really enjoyable to read! One thing I like about your work is your uncanny ability to capture the character's souls and portray them so majestically.
Perfect, awesome job!
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Again, I liked this. How about a poem about how Yusuke views his life before and after he became the Spirit Detective? I'll be watching for it!

Really good. Unique and individual. I anticipate the next one. I'm getting into poetry a little more than I had been with the last review I wrote for you, so I can understand it a little better. And, for future reference, Japanese people are Buddhist and believe in multiple gods instead of a single one. Just thought you might like to know.
~Allie (Wakajini no Shijo)~

awe! *sniffles*that was really angsty and sad..but it was good! ^__^

*Hiei: o.o" God help me.*
That's right, Hiei. Prepare yourself!
LOL! Hey, Dancer! Another lovely piece. OK, the subject matter isn't "lovely" but very nicely handled! I likesy a lot! I have a few ideas on how Hiei might be handled (Kuwabara: Yeah, VERY carefully!!). Hey! Got a new email addy at work - appliance-specialists@mcihispeed.net. Email me there or at home. C-ya!!

This is great! I love the beautifully written work! I don't have any ideas but Keep it up! ^_^

That was pretty. I guess you should do Hiei next.

I like this poem, especially the last four lines. You should definately make one about Hiei!

That was wonderful, PLease do Hiei next. Great job ^_^