To return the review...this story definitely has me hooked! And I've only seen the "first" three original movies about oh, five, six times each since getting them in May, not to mention having listened to the Star Wars Christmas Album (old record of Mom's) a couple times, too...Great job; I'll attempt to read more between classes.

oh, more more more more MORE! Please, im going to die, the suspence is killing me. This is fantastic! You have a real flair for writing and youre very good at capturing characters' personalities. Keep it up!

"Leia massaged her temples with her fingertips. What in the name of the Force is going on?"

She's taking the words right out of my mouth... Your last plot twist *really* confused me. Now I'm waiting even more impatiently for your next chapter...

oh, mystery and excitement abound! too bad about pash getting shot after his daddy died, but you seem to hate cracken so much that it fits. :p keep up the good work, and get them out of trouble. soon!

*grin*

Wes our hero *giggle*
Brilliant or Insane? :D

again a great chapter

Mag

again a cliffy FIEND ;)
good chapter
me like it :D

Mag

yes! you DID update within an hour, just like i hoped. yeah, same s/n as on 's fanfic boards.

great job, as always. and i'm glad that wedge isn't dead - not that i expected him to be, you've been more than evil enough in this one anyway. :p

i found it amusing that Bel Iblis located them because of reports about shooting. fits the rogues. you could probably play that up a little bit more, if you chose, but it's great as it is - a little bit of hidden humor or irony for those reading closely. or maybe it's just me - where i am, it's 1:36 AM, so i'd lean towards the latter. o:-)

funny that wes actually admits he's doing something stupid. clever. and speaking of clever, so was the last sentence.

dun dun dun . . . it's stalker-man!

one crit, an annoying fragment you'll want to fix. "Then he looked around for the Wraiths. Who seemed to have a similar idea about dealing with the first shooter." fragments can be used effectively, and if you meant to do it . . . well, i don't think you should bother here. just change that period after "Wraiths" to a comma and it'll be so much better.

keep up the great work!

I'm still reading this fic, and the Hoth and Tycho ones. I don't have much time to review but I just wanted to let you know I think you're writing some fantastic stories. Keep it up--I like these plots!

HI!

again a great post :D
me like it
but poor Wedge!
you are so evil to the poor boys ;)

Mag

Argh, your cliffhangers are giving me headaches :S Now I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter :p

oh gripping. Dunno about the title. Maybe you could have something about the fact that the past always comes back to you, or never leaves you alone. Haunting demons, or something

It just keeps getting deeper and deeper... Thanks for keeping the updates coming.

Brilliant!

I loved the scenes with Wedge and Cracken, but I even more loved the scenes between Jesina and Wes. There's a lot of things you can do wrong with "I love you."-scenes (like making them overly sappy and stuff), but I liked the way you avoided all of that.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while... I really love this story. Please keep up the good work.

Wow, you're up-dating at a marvelous speed ;)

Apart from that: You're not nice to Jesina and Wes, you know that? :p Oh, and to the other ones as well :p But I trust you to get this all done well in the end. :)