 Elli Cole 2005-10-28 . chapter 1Hey.
Well, I noticed that this wasn't a Miroku / Kagome fiction and that stopped me on my tracks. Really, all I read now are Miroku / Kagome or Kagome / Sesshoumaru fics. I hate Inuyasha. I'm so sorry if you like him (no offence, please.) But I just don't like him.
Although, I forced myself to read at least one chapter and I think that... this is really nice. It's well written--and has a plot!--I just couldn't see any flaws. It's really good only there is one problem... I don't like the choice of pairings. ^__^
I maybe wrong but... as far as I have read, I think it's a InuKag and MirSan coupling. I'm really sorry if I can't read any further. But I like the chappie still.
I've also looked at the rest of your fics and saw that almost all of them are Yu-Gi-Oh fics... oh, if only I watch that anime but unfortunately, not. I don't like it that much. Ugh. I'm such a meanie.
BUT WAIT!
If ever you think about doing a MirKag fic... let me know! I love them. Hehe.
Anyway, I must be on my way now. I need to update my fics. Hehe!
Huggles, my dear. Mwah! |
 forgoten 2004-10-11 . chapter 17Hay is's me! did you miss me?been a whil hu?I'v got a new story!!it's called SACRED TEARS its a yuyu/inu fic 2 ch up!im done typing three but havent put it up yet will you pleas read it BUT YOUR NOT ALOUD TO MACK FUN OF ME!I'm bagging you pleas r and r ^_^ talk soon bey!
PS. I put your fic on my fav list |
 Demon Girl17 2004-08-16 . chapter 4 uh, it's a good idea, but some things seem... I dunno. it sounds jumbled together, all sorts of ideas mixed up, so the fic just doesn't seem to flow, and I keep getting confused about what's going on and how suddenly something is brought up that wasn't even mentioned before. But it may just be me. Keep trying though. |
 someone : ) 2004-08-13 . chapter 16 omg, that was really really good, plz keep writing, i really enjoyed this fic! |
 kerowyn 2004-08-13 . chapter 16 This fanfic was awsome! I hope you finish it. I got alittle confused when you kept skipping around, but i got the hang of it. You are a really great writter. I can't wait to read the ending to your story. |
 FluffyAstrael 2004-08-12 . chapter 16I love this fic! I don't know why you only have nine reviews because surely more then that have read it. |
 kira 2004-08-12 . chapter 16 that's a really good story! plz keep writing, and i'll keep reviewing!!
~kira |
 freaky-hanyou 2004-08-10 . chapter 1altho i aint to fond of angst, i figured i could use a good romance story so i decided to read...wo! so far it looks very good...*random* i need to update soon...heh heh...*whistles* |
 FantasyDreamer06 2004-07-20 . chapter 15Agh! How dare you leave it here?! Ok, in the last chapter you skipped from Shippou's dream to Butterfly and Sesshoumaru w/out a warning. If you use the little * things between the paragraphs that have a scene change, the story would be easier to follow. But, your plot line rocks and the details and wording is superb! So I love your story! Just try and make scene changes more prounounced! ttfn
-Crystal aka Shorty40 |
 forgotten 2004-07-06 . chapter 5 sup it's me you know the ather of a dream come true . fan girl 2 . I LOVE YOUR STORY! Im only on chaoter 5 but it's alredy awsome! And I thout I was the only one that thout naraku was hot! and no afens but your friends are bakas! But don't worry I hove crazy frinds to. Yes I remember a boy named cris asked me the veary same questen and now he has a brused shin and a lump on his thik head . P.S sorry buot the spelling ^_^; |
 ForteXD 2004-06-28 . chapter 4I really enjoy your writing style, yet I have no idea why this story isn't more popular. Maybe it's because you're classy and didn't use any cheap hooks to get reviews ;). But I like the way you write the characters, and you have very few typos. good job! |
 Kiddi Chi 2004-06-14 . chapter 1SUPER SUPER SUPER! INU-YASHA!! WHE. Hey! It's me! ^__^ OH yeah, my AIM died! GAH. So go and IM me at V4in6L4mi12 okay? GREAT! I LOVE YOU! BYEE! |
 Sesshomaru's 2004-05-12 . chapter 1Hey thanks for liking my stories and for reviewing. But I haven't really had any good ideas or reason to update. Maybe in a while but I'm not sure. Thanks again. |
 Kealilah 2004-05-07 . chapter 8I haven't read all of it, however I just wanted to tell you about the decriptive grammer used in this fanfic... Not many authors these days care about that and continue on lazily with the plot, but it really seems like you take the time and spend time on your writing :D
I'd also read the beggining of your bio and I wanted to tell you, if you dont suceed the first time - try again and again! (Talking about the lack of reviews you were mentioning)
Any who, nice fiction and if you have any spare time - feel free to read mine.
So long,
Sayonara! |
 Kawaii Rin 2004-04-16 . chapter 4 ur fanfix are great 'to my opinion'
u have a quite imagination there
well,hope that you'll continue soon |