Thank you Lord Cynic, because of your 'Life of the adepts' stories I am now forever hooked on Fanfiction, lol. But seriously thank you. Your stories are some of the greatest I've read.

Gallahan

P.S.
Please keep up the excellent work and for the love of God, don't quit.

Try using a good song.

Um.. weird, but good.

(Yay, my muses aren't bothering me!)

I'm not that much of a mudshipper, but if the story's good... And, it is good! Great story!! :D

Uwah, so cute! Random, I must say - but so damn kawaii! >.< I wish you wouldn't leave it there - it makes me feel like more is to come! T_T Aw well...

*nod* Yeah, I'm back on this reading fic spree, lol... I may not get through them all in the half an hour I have, but I'll try my best... After all, I have a physics and maths tutor coming soon (yes, in the summer holidays. And yes, I am stupid, even though the school I go to is pretty... prestigious...), and I'm NOT pleased... *grimace*

Anyway, nice work - see ya.

Princess Viv

David and Lauren: Black hasn't said anything yet...
Black: ...
David: Black?
Black:... *starts clapping*
D & L: *follow suit*
Black: Loved it Cynic, great writing format, very well written also... I loved the end. Gave me chills. Continue writing the great stories... also, Update Mercury Matchmaker!
David: Yeah!
Black

You know.. your stories are as good as ever.. and the song did suit the atmosphere of desolation that is prominent not only in the story.. but in life.
But still, after going through a life-changing experience such as I had last Holy Week, something makes me wonder... To whom is this song dedicated to? Who did the singer dedicate this song to? Evil, Sinner, or God? I ask your opinion.
Well, sorry for being a tad bit dark, but still... makes you wonder at times. The ending was good, but an interesting surprise.
One more thing, what is your definition of Love? A feeling or a commitment?
'Til next time!
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2 Chronicles 7:14
"If my people, who are called by my name, will humble themselves and pray, seek my face, and turn from their evil ways, I will hear them in heaven, forgive their sins, and heal their Land"
- God

Well, Cynic...I must commend you yet again on your terrific writing skills. You seem to have two writing styles, from what I can see... One, the humor side of you that creates the wacky BSM and M, and second, the romantic/serious side that isn't afraid to grab the readers and drag them into the story. To tell the truth, I really admire the latter... You're really amazing at that.
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Now, just a thought...and this may be a little annoying for me to try to give suggestions, but I've been trying to do that with my reviews, so it wouldn't be right not to. I think that the song would have been more effective if you had put the words in italics instead of inside quotation marks. It worked out very good in quotation marks, but I can see it having an even better effect in italics.
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Once again, you land a story on my favorites... I should probably try a song-fic one of these days...
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No matter what people say about mudshipping not working, you can always make it work. Congrats!
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~Joker