Awsome story!! One thing- the 'Aisteru Ran' should be 'Ai Shite Iru Ran' that means 'Ilove you' in Japanese. And, Yui is a name of a girl, not a name of a boy!! And, maybe, ayumi could resemble as Ran for Yui! that drunkard who hit Ran should be brought to jail!! How dare he? Hmpp!!

you killed her the same way I did! This was great! I oved it!

*sobs* im acutally crying now well written *sniffs* well at least shes not real...

wow...your stories are good...

no...why ran? *in tears*
you didnt mention Ai, Hakuba, Sonoko...
honestly...i think Ayumi's role here suits better on Ai