This is really good. Don't stop now.

Let me guess what happens next... Harry relizes he's onto a good thing, and starts up a TV show for muggles under the fake name John Edwards! LOL

hm.. wonder what's in the vault. Love the Hermione setting up a new branch of the ministry! te he ... she would so do that too

hm...interesting next chapter! as much as I like this story I'm really interested for your next one .. the grammer or something is a little off. excellent though. I want to find out what happens next!

great that i got you posting again, lol. hope it works a second time!!

i really like your story. very touching chapter. will wait for more.

the "ghost stories" were very touchingly written ... got to say that I love this line though ..: Ron looked scandalized at the thought that anything could be more important than Quidditch

Ahahaha!

I died for Dennis. Luna Lovegood died saving Hermione Granger. Remus Lupin died saving Ginny Weasley.

aw...

that was a neat "goodbye" part .. like a thank you of the living after the thank yous of the dead ...

are there going to be more chapters? your author alerted anyways ..

thanks for writing!

“I’d hate to interrupt-

"No," Ron said carefully, "take as long as you need."

Ahahahaha

aw, why'd hermione go home?

oh yea, she's back! lol

your writing is really good ... its mostly little things like using the word "informed me" ... as in : Remus informed me that my parents' house, the one that they owned before going into hiding, was still standing and well hidden. He told me where to find the key."

it just sounds a little forced and not-realistic (this is really common, I call it the "Dawson's Creek" style ... sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't.) I'm not sure if you're just trying to make Harry sound more grown up, but if you are its not really working. besides that though, the writing is excellent!

o ... Neville! I like him ...

reading on!

Ghost such as those at Hogwarts are seen and heard because everything they do happens at a frequency that is within the human spectrum of sight and sound. If you’ve ever had a ghost pass through you, you can feel it, but a ghost cannot pick up objects. The form that they take and control is their ectoplasm, ghosts have a low radiation level.

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thanks for reading and reviewing my story! I thought I'd take the time to check out what you've written ... I tried your other story but it didn't catch my interest so much ... and I might have read it before ... can't remember (I think I've permenantly damaged my memory after those MCATs!!)

I like the way you went around the house and told what each person was thinking and feeling ... your writing is a bit choppy though, but it adds character to the sad tale. The Light and Dark parts were neat ... not obviously canon, but who cares? they worked in well!

reading on then ...

Can't say that there's anything in this chapter that I would need to point out to be fixed. it's an awesome chapter and you're a very good writer. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll be looking forward to reading more soon!

well, I understand, harry! next chapter up, quick! this is REALLY GOOD!

I like how you're starting out this story. It looks like it'll shape up to be a very good read. Keep up the awesome work!

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I htink it is really good,though i am not so fon on ginny/harry stuff