Nice fic, some helpful advice though.
"Strait" should be "straight"
"Lose" Should be "Loose"
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MG#6

Whoa!AMAZING!Really awesome!Thanks for making this great Cleris story!:D:D:D

Aw, I was hoping there'd be more. I mean, it ended on a happy note but it didn't really feel like an ending. I am glad that Aerith was able to save Cloud! ^^ Those two are meant for each other and Aerith is his light. I just wish there were more fics with this pairing. I hope you continue to write and improve. =)

very good story...KEEP IT UP!

Hey, I think this could have been put into different chapters! :D That'd way it wouldn't be a one shot. Well, anyway, good story. Did you play KH2, yet?

Alright! This is my first Kingdom Hearts fan fic! You should be honored! Lol. Just messing. I really liked it. I loved how you said that the wing and the claw were the signs of his darkness. And I didn't think the battle would end! O.o Lol. When Cloud was consumed by the darkness...THAT WAS SO KOOL! I LOVED IT! I could see the aura around him and the darkness and hate in his eyes! It was a perfect picture! And when Cloud was fighting the darkness...and Aerith was his light...I just loved it! It was a great story! It's going on my favorite story list! You did a grat job. Reading that makes me want to write a Kingdom Hearts story based on Cloud! I'm more of a Vincent fan, but I'll still write it! I'll have my Vincent fanism into it too! Yeah! *Smiles.* I'm glad you kept it as a very long one shot instead of a chapter story. It was a lot better that way. I usally don't read one shots either! Lol. Well, I really liked your story. You did a great job! *Gives thumbs up.* Arigato! ^-^

Kikino

OMG,my butt hurts a lot xD hahaha, I said: eerr, another fic... this one is going to be short, but no, it was long, and entertainment. now I need to go ;.; anyways, really cute, I don;'t know what happened to sephy, but who cares! O.o CLOUD KISSED AERIS.

So beautiful.

Oh my god! That was brill! I hope you write more stories like that, I love stories with Cloud nearly dying. They ROCK!
P.S. - Nice Hades imitation *^_^*

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Nice.

That was pretty good. Bad grammar...but I liked it. Especially the end. I'm glad someone makes Aerith and Cloud fanfics like this.

Dear me... I love this! it's so... oh my the battle seemed neverending, and when I thought there wasn't going to be a happy ending you gave us one! *is crying* amazing fic... definitely one of the best ones I've ever read ;-; Please continue writing I just read the first chapter of "Project Holy" and that was amazing as well, you are truly a wonderful writer. Hope to read more from you soon ;-;

wow this is so cool please do more ^^ this goes in my favs and so do u

Wow! A very long fic, but very good, indeed! I have to say that this is one of my favourites! So mutch action, romance etc. I love you! *glomps*
Please make more KH fics. This was so awesome!!

I've read this story several times and to be honest... I love this story!Keep this up man.
Farewell...