oh i wonder what seph will do next time him and cloud meets ^^ really good start ^^

Oh, I love this fanfic... I'm rereading it for the second time this week. It's so hard to find fics where Cloud's actually in character nowadays. This is so perfect for their personalities in the actual game, and I wish more was coming... last updated four years ago, but hope springs eternal, I suppose.

Write more like this! I love them. <3

Hum... I do like SephirothXCloudXAeris love thing I really do Can't They all get a long and share him?. but yeah I wish Cloud would pall To both of them if Sephiroth wasn't so well you know...lol.
But yeah Good luck on the next part if not this was a Good Story.

i like it when crazyroth and kinkyroth are merged >:3 hehehe

i really think that you need to update this fic! its one that ive been waiting to update for a while now and its driving me nuts to not know whats gonna happen next! other than that i think that you make wonderful fics that really should be continued

YAY! Um...Sue you? I like submissive Cloud! :D

love this one, love all of your fics.. I really hope that you haven't abandoned your fics forever, since they're so great, but it's been two years, so who knows.. anyway, I'll probably still be waiting, no matter how long you take ^^ I'm very much looking forwards to it (if you ever do take them up again, that is). :)

Wow, are you going to continue? Can we see what happens when Sephiroth catches Cloud?

F**K#! Pulling out your hair like that would tear out bits from your scalp! makes my shudder just thinking about it!

really good fic though! liked the jealous voices!

mako

Wow that's pretty good! I love it so much! please update ! And i'm go on your site and I love it so much!

dang, i really want to see the next chapte rof this... or at least what happens when Seph catches cloud later... hehehehe

*perks up* I love you, Jen. Not only your website and LJ commu, but your fics too. Marry me

I tell you What! Thats a story Hurry Hurry and Finish it. Dont you think that Sephiroth is a total Hottie!

I like this, but I don't agree with your personification of Sephiroth, I'd think he'd be calmer somehow, more calculating, more sensual, his kind of brutal right now you know ^^

I LIKE this story! Especially a very submisive Cloud and a KinkyRoth! As much as Cloud denies CrazyRoth's touch, we ALL know he loves/enjoys it VERY much!!

I can't WAIT till you update this!! I hope you update this story soon!

over and out! See ya!