 krazyANIMEchick 2007-04-22 . chapter 13I love this story! Please update soon! |
 darkangel_alynna 2007-04-07 . chapter 13 good job!!update soon k :P
alynna |
 darkangel_alynna 2007-03-28 . chapter 12 I LOVED IT!pls update soon its so cool i cant wait! u did a great job! ill be waiting...
alynna |
 blooded wyngs 2007-03-27 . chapter 12Well, I guess the second part of this trip is hunting for Enishi..
To rescue him or to totally murder him.. I don't know.. XD, It's up to Kaoru.. |
 Ken-nii B 2007-03-25 . chapter 12 If I feel sorry for anyone right now, it's Tomoe...She never even got her chnce o be with Kenshin, and if she doesn't get him, who will she be with? Poor Tomoe..Oh well, GRREEAT story, can't wait for the next chappie! Love n Peace ^_^x |
 jenniebennie 2007-03-24 . chapter 12go Enish save Kaoru but shes safe with Kenshin. Love triangle here we come. buwhahaha. ok you did good on this chapter keep up the good work. |
 krazyANIMEchick 2007-03-24 . chapter 12aw! Poor Enishi! ^_^ |
 krazyANIMEchick 2007-03-22 . chapter 11AW~ I hope nothing bad goes wrong for Kaoru~ Please updates soon! |
 jenniebennie 2007-03-17 . chapter 11I can just see it. Enishi and Kaoru together would be great although i do like Kenshin with Kaoru. Keep it up I can't wait to see waht happends. |
 exax 2007-03-17 . chapter 11I must say that this was a nice surprise. A new chapter. Although I can say that I was quite worried when I read : "And I’ve lost my motivation.."
Hopefully you haven't lost the motivation to continue with this story.
Good chapter and hopefully you'll find the encouragement to continue to write on. 'Cuz I'll be waiting :Þ
Oh and Ps. I almost forgot. I have to mention that I had some difficulties understanding who was saying what at the end of the chapter. Can be quite confusing when you don't have the names. |
 blooded wyngs 2007-03-17 . chapter 11Enishi can't see them.. he's going blind..XD
Poor Kaoru.. it'll spoil her plan.. hope it goes another way though..XD |
 krazyANIMEchick 2007-02-05 . chapter 10That was interesting! Hopefully Kenshin starts liking Kaoru while they are pretending to date! Please update soon! |
 exax 2007-02-05 . chapter 10Huh ... "only" 10 chapters ? ... But ... I ... Need .. More !!
Anyhow, great story you've got there. Started on the first chapter last night, got intrigued (extremely) and tried to finish up to ch.10 to see what would/could've happened. But couldn't due to ..."technical problems" .. so I'm reviewing now instead.
There aren't overall any problems I've seen so far except a couple of grammar mistakes here and there (and believe me, there aren't many of those).
One thing I highly like about this story is that you really couldn't tell whether this would be a KxK story or ExK or whatever it would be (until you actually told us) which (I think at least) shows your skills in terms of writing storylines.
Well anyhow, hopefully you will continue with this story. 'Cuz frankly I'll be waiting! |
 Midori Konbu 2007-02-05 . chapter 9you're one cruel authoress.. heehhe.. and pls. keep it that way.. ^_~ |
 Midori Konbu 2007-02-05 . chapter 8Oh, I almost killed you for making him gay, phew... but a K/K eh? *sigh* I was hoping for an EK, but a KK will do to... *runs to next chapter* |