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| lec 2006-03-09 ch 19,  | abusethe suspense is killing me. is jack the father? |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-08-22 ch 19, | abuseSuch a great story!! plz update soon!! |
| Serindipity9 2005-05-27 ch 19, | abuseThis remindes me so much of a story my great grandmother used to tell me. You see she lived in Germany till she and her husband moved to the states. Well My great grandmother fell in love with a Russian. And my grandmothers family didnt like that neither did my great grandfathers family. Well it was their first christmas together and well lets just say that it ended up with my great grandfathers mother throwing the gizzared at my grandmothers mother. It was pretty bad except (oh yeah forgott to say that this was before they were married) that, that night my great grandmother was very very upset and my great granddad comferted her all night long and thats the night she said she truely realized that she truely wanted to spend the rest of her life with this man. so it worked out all right. |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2005-05-27 ch 19, | abuseYay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Ü Can you tell how happy I am with this development? Ü |
| Ren201 2005-05-26 ch 19, | abuseOh yay! A post! haven't heard anything from you in a while! This is a great chapter! So Nadia might be Jack's ... dun dun dun! lol. Post again soon! -sorry for the short review!- -Lauren |
| Aliasfan 2005-05-26 ch 19, anon. | abuseI have to say you have a decent premise, but this has to one of the worst characterizations I have ever read in my life. Your grammar is excellent, just please be realistic. It's quite nauseating. |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-05-25 ch 19, anon. | abusei've missed this story! great job! can't wait 4 more!! plz update soon! |
| spygirl4747 2005-05-25 ch 19, | abuseAh!Is Jack's Nadia's father! Ah this is crazy!! Not a cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next update! |
| supergirl141 2005-03-23 ch 18, | abuseoo i missed this fic! very nice update and i hope vaughn turns out okay! |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-03-21 ch 18, | abuseso glad that u update!! can't wait 4 more plz update soon! |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2005-03-20 ch 18, | abuseaww... but is Nadia really Sloane's? (Did you answer this question in the past chapters? I don't really remember. But then again, I have an awful memory...) Jack and Nadia scenes are in the next chapter? :D hehe... update soon :D |
| spygirl4747 2005-03-20 ch 18, | abusegreat job! Thank you soo much for the update! |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-03-14 ch 17, anon. | abusethis is such a great story!! hope u finish it! |
| jessie 2005-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE this story and i hope you continue it very soon!:) |
| spygirl4747 2005-01-18 ch 17, | abuseGreat story its fabulous! Update soon please! |