 Sam 2005-11-01 . chapter 16 Aw! Melinda, that was a sad chapter, but it was really good. It makes me feel good inside that Joey will always be there for Pacey and that she really loves him. It was kind of a depressing chapter, seeing as Gretchen died and all, but your writing style is BRILLANT!! I could actually feel like I was there, I could hear the music, everything.
Another great chapter!! :)
And I WILL read your behind closed doors!! :)
It's sad that the next chapter will be the epilouge... but...
*sigh*
All good things come to an end.
And your As Real As It Gets story... Melinda, it was really good. ;)
-sam m+c |
 Sam 2005-10-25 . chapter 15 hey Melidna!!
You'll never guess who's actually typing this. It's me, Sam!! I'm finally reviewing! Are you happy? I am! I am glad tha tI finally got a chance to read your story!! I'm sorry I have been late... next chapter you put up I will not be as late as I am now. But it was a really good chapter. And Pacey's right: things are always goign to be complicated between hima nd Joey. That's weird, though. Why would he still love her, see her with another guy that seh obviously didn't love,a nd then just want to dump her off like that? Maybe he's scared. Is that your whole idea?? I already nkow what happens to Gretchen... in the next chapter that you're going to write... so it's kind of sad the way Pacey only stays to see her for that short amount of time that he does, and he is morec oncentrated on him and Joey's relationship than his actual sister, you know? I mean, I know that he must go on with his life and everything, but this is his sister in a coma!! It's a wonderful chapter Melinda, and I really enjoyed reaqding it. The only bad thing would be that I do not have my contacts on and it was really hard for me to read so I had to squinch up to the computer and I just realized now that you can magnify the size, so I guess that's just me being stupid or something. I can't even read what I am typing at the present moment, either, because everything is blurry and I dont' feel like putting my nose up to the screen again!! So sorry if there are any typos and whatnot (which there probably are... yeah... because sometimes I get too far ahead of myself and I keep on typing and stuff). I can't believe this is the third to last chapter!! And this story you started abck in freshman year!! Gosh, I feel so old. I mean, we're juniors now and it's October and you started this like in March or April of Freshman year, that was the year 2004... right? Or maybe you started it in 2003, I don't know, but it's almost 2006 and wow!! Time geos by fast. Well, actually, it went by kind of slow at the time I was experiencing everything and waiting for you to update your story (Yeah that time went by REALLY SLOW! Especially all through sophomore year when I was begging you to write it every single day and you were like no, no, no, and you had like a million other Dawsons Creek stories that you wrote instead) but now that I am thinking about it, it's going by too fast and I want you to update your story IMMEDIATELY and I definately DO NOT WANT YOUR AS REAL AS IT GETS STORY TO END! You can not end this story, Melinda. r, if you do decide to end it, I want you to come up with a Part II or a sequel of some sort. I knwo I already tried convincing you to write a sequel when you're done, and I don't know why you oppose the idea!! It's a good story and everybody else seems to think so, too!! You're a good writer, Melinda!! Oh you know what I just got a really good idea! You know, Lucky C>?? You know how you said he's supposed to be all ghetto and weird and stuff like that? Well, why don't you have him have that one car that we saw today with the huge wheels that you wanted to ride home in instead of my car, so yeah, then that would eb funny!! NO WAIT! NOT THAT CAR! The green one! Your favorite car in teh parking lot, the green one that has no trunk that we always see and we saw it today and that one time when I parked next to it. IT's so cool. THAT should definately be the car that Lucky C will drive. :) Or you should have that be Joey's car or Pacey's car, I don't know. Soembody's car. You could make Pacey WANT that car, but it'd be Lucky's and he wouldn't give it to him. Hm... soundsl iek a good plan to me. What do you think? That way you could be tying in some aspects of real life, too. And it's AS REAL AS IT GETS, so this story is supposed to be real. MELINDA! IT WILL BE AWESOME! Just think of the possibilities! :) :) :)
Anyway I can't wait for your next chapter. And I hope that you write it SOON! You have to. I know you have already started writing it. :) ANd I will review sooner than I did this time, too, so you won't have to worry about it. Yeah... sorry ag ain about not reviewing as much as I should. If my computer was not crashed and I did not have to depend on this computer downstairs, then I would have reviewed sooner. I was going to review when I first got home from school too, but I couldn't because our internet was down, and so I had to yell at my dad to fix it!! And he di dand that's good because I finally got a chance to review your WONDERFUL AS REAL AS IT GETS STORY!
I hope you like my extremely long review. ANd I will see you tomrorow when I pick you up.
-sam M+C |
 superfan24 2005-10-14 . chapter 15no... no... no! i've wait so long for an ud, and i get sadness! but, as always, the writing was very good! that steve guy was not a good person at all... toots... pacey thinking joey would sleep with him to get her story... toots... well, anyways, i love this story, so ud it soon. w/e happened to jack and dawson? are they not important anymore? o well, ud asap! |