I adore the lines, "Dawn shouldn't fear ; dawn shouldn't care ; dawn shouldn't fight. Dawn should only be wondered at from afar."

This is impressive - you've taken a seemingly meaningless footnote and turned it into a beautiful metaphor. *loves*

"I am the Singer, and I am the Left-Handed's Hand, and the protection of a broken daybreak."

That line is heart-wrenching. Poor Maedhros... but I guess I should feel better that his brother is taking care of him. Wonderful job!

Beautiful!
I like it a lot.

The Left-Handed's hand? That would explain a lot about why Mae&Mag stuck together through the First Age. Lovely touching little vignette. Hope you write more fic in English. :)