This was heart-breaking! T.T Good Job!

Aw...so sad...poor Hughes...

Great story.

This is pretty good! I was looking for the first FMA fic listed as Roy and Riza on this site but I don't think this is it...even though it's listed as the oldest. This is a great story!

That was beautiful, and I'm surprised that it didn't get more reviews! Sorry, I'm a late comer to this website! )

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Good story filler. I was hoping to see what might have happened when and if Roy and Riza found out about Hughes. I feel so sorry for his wife and daughter. Keep writing!

Wow, I never noticed that he had the picture. You are much more observant than I. _

That would be a good explanation then. This was a very nice piece and I plan to look and see if you ever made the "sister" piece you talked about.

I loved this inbetween sequence! It was just fit so well!

WA! So sad! sob. but it was good! sniff

aww... why does Hughes have o die.. he's one of my fav characters. im also having bad luck because... the website that i download from for FMA isn't letting me. T.T Great story! and Email me if u knoe a site where i can downlaod FMA plz.

*sniff* That was . . . so mournful. Wonderfully written. Excellent mood and use of narrative. *applauds*

hehe, i'm such a sucker for mustangxhawkeye. actually, this is the 3rd time i've read this but this is first time i had something in mind to say.
i like the piece itself, but Hawkeye was out of character in the end. I just can't see her doing that n.n;;
(the picture on Mustang's desk is of him and Hughes which was taken from the cover of fma manga chap.16... notice that Hughes is wearing military uniform instead of usual civilian... just a thought )

I've always liked Hawkeye for some reason, and I did actually notice the photo on Roy's deskk that one time.

Wow! That was good! There aren't enough RoyxHawkeye stuff out there, and not all of it is very good, but this...this is great! Everyone's really in-character (which is a rarity) and it's overall very well written. Please keep writing!