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leencz 2005-11-16 . chapter 2
why are there only TWO chapters?
baby loves jonny 2005-03-03 . chapter 1
dat was really lame hahah u suk at writing completely! jst get drunk find a gf and get a life man
gredandforge4454 2005-02-22 . chapter 2
Name- Sarah

Age- 13

Appearance- Brown Hair, Green Eyes, A little bit of freckles, etc.

Personality- I dont know how to decribe me. Nice I guess... I like to find out what people are feeling, so I can help. I dont like when people diss others for being themselves, I hang with friends, go to movies etc.

Likes- I like Tennis, Volleyball, Hockey, Reading, Drawing (with ink and ink pens).

Dislike- Judging others, people who dont clean up after themselves, girls who worry about their weight or boys.

Wow, I just told you a lot about myself... HeHe.

I like your story, but updating it 2 a year..not cool.

Keep writing.

Love.
Sarah
Miraglos 2005-02-18 . chapter 3
hey, just thought I'd let you know, this site doesn't allow authors to have a chapter with just an author's note. Most of the time, I've found that they remove your story and take away your posting priviliges for a short while.
So it would probably be best if you got rid of this chapter before they delete your whole story. I've seen this happen many times before.

Just trying to be helpful!
Drunken Boxer 2004-12-08 . chapter 2
interesting...write more!! and i know its been like, 7 months, but still, more would be nice...
Elphiey 2004-06-15 . chapter 1
I like k=like that, keep it up
Empress of Cats 2004-05-08 . chapter 2
ME! ME WANTS TO BE IN IT!
Name: Jazmine
Age: 14
Appearance: Wavy Black hair, tan skin, dark brown eyes 5'5"
Personality: Strange at times, Crazy logic, Nice
Likes: Cursing in Japanese, dancing/singing, internet, SUGAR, Kare Kano, CANDY, Reading, pants
Dislikes: Being so strange, meanies, skirts/dresses, WAY cold weather, stupid people
Nosilla 2004-05-08 . chapter 2
It's a good thing. lol.
ME WANTS TO BE IN IT! But if you don't need mw I don't mind.
Name: Libby
Age:14
Appearance: 5 4, tan, dark brown hair, dark brown eyes average weight and stuff
Personality: hyper, can be a bit strange at times
Likes: speaking in broken languages other than English(Spanish Italian), animals, warm weather, fuzzy sweaters, the internet, chocolate, having weird friends, and umm... SUGAR!
Dislikes: herself, cold weather, way to hot weather, skirts, dresses, white chocolate, FAKE chocolate, FAKE SUGAR.
Lia Tween 2004-05-08 . chapter 2
I like this alot! I can't wait to see what else happens, and if it was really only a dream! WRITE MORE PLEASE!
ZiggyGurl 2004-05-07 . chapter 2
Yay! Updates. Second update as good as the first one. Trying to hurry up and finish review before parents get home, must not be caught on computer. Great chapter. Great work. You rock!
Rhade's Rose 2004-05-07 . chapter 2
HEY! This is Pearl Brandybuck...I changed my pen name...
Anyways, great chapter. I can't wait to find out why Squid only remembers CGL and why hes there!
Great fic!
Thanks for the review
~Christina
tina-leo18 2004-05-07 . chapter 2
This was great!! Please finish it soon! I can't wait to read it!! I want to find out what his decision is! This is a great story that you've got going here!
tina-leo18 2004-05-07 . chapter 1
I haven't read holes for a while so this kind of confused me, but it also got me very interested! I think that you have a great Plot going! So i'm going to go and read the next chapter, Good work!!
Michael Taravera 2004-05-06 . chapter 1
I agree with Seth.
MissBubbles 2004-05-06 . chapter 2
Cool second chapter!
Still good, still different!
Update soon!
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