Well done, Neville, you're such a kind guy.

I can't even tell you how many times I've wished one of my classmates would set their textbook on fire to distract the teacher! No, really.

Aw, Neville! That was unbelievably cute. (^_^)

>Lol nice

Ohh! what a cute story!! I love Neville!! he is so adorable in this story!

Aw. And now I am madly in love with Neville. Curse you.

Aw! Neville's Gryffindor nature shining through! I love that the focuse of the story stays on him, his own rather shy nature, and his unique brand of loyalty. Wonderfully done.

aw... ^_^ ^_^ ^_^... for some reason, i really like this. it's brief but well-written, and the plot is so - so - AW! ^_^ but no one is out of character, and the aw-plot is logical. i can see neville doing something like that. yep, you must definitely -
- keep writing! ^_^

Great start! I like your writing, it's easy to read and it flow and makes sense, I wish more people would write like you. Hmhp, Icluding myself, lol. Are you going to continue or is it a one shot?

GREAT JOB! Really cute and well written!

Ma seour, you're evil. Good fic. Now let me go!