 TheMarshmaloWizardGhostCookie 2007-08-11 . chapter 13great story! but im not much of a DM/Hr fan. its fantastic other than that though! |
 swordbunny4486 2007-07-28 . chapter 13nice |
 Ladyspear 2004-09-27 . chapter 13*whacks draco* bad draco.
Draco: *whimpers*
(heh. I have all the HP people in my head. It gets crowded sometimes but its fun to get them drunk.) |
 Mea Lux - Mea Duces 2004-04-22 . chapter 13Nice chapter! If you want to make anything happen between Hermione and Ron, I think you would need to find a new way of writing it, since so many people have done that already. Writing it the way too many others have would take away from the originality of the story. Anyway, write more soon! |
 lamepunknbored 2004-04-18 . chapter 13I was surprised with the plot twist, I really thought you were going to keep him nice. I'm excited to see exactly what path you do go down with this story. I can't really think of any problems with it.. So I will leave you to write more! heh.. |
 lestrange24 2004-04-17 . chapter 1 really good can't wait till more! |
 texasjeanette 2004-04-16 . chapter 13Coolness! I am glad you liked my suggestion about Harry... and since you would be using one ghost... what about enlisting the aid of the other ghosts of the castle... I mean they could make wonderful spies... and especially the Bloody Baron and Moaning Myrtle would have reasons to help with the downfall of Tom... one because he sully's the name of Slytherin... and the other because he did in fact cause her death. And ghosts can be invisible... and they can leave the castle... and they have lost their spy... and have outed the spy in the castle... perhaps now would be a good time to set the ghosts loose... I mean one possible plotline could be the unification of ALL of Hogwarts against Tom... and Harry could be the thing that spurs them on... making the Love he had for his friends and family the "thing" he had that Tom did not... and if that "thing" could carry over into death even better... What better revenge against Tom than to get him when he thinks he won? You could even consider something that would allow Harry himself to help in the fight... and since Lucius was the one who actually killed him... and it was done in a cowardly manner... perhaps there is some sort of Wizards Justice that would allow Harry to kill him and somehow regain his own life? Just a thought. I realize that I am rambling... but your story just has so many possibilities...
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And I truly liked the plot twist with Draco... so did not see that coming. Hurry and post, texasjeanette |
 carly114 2004-04-15 . chapter 12 why'd you make draco evil? he's going to be nice again, right? |
 dotty stripes 2004-04-15 . chapter 12wow! so far this is a really good story, i absolutely love the draco characterisation you have, it is just so spot on. anyway, keep on posting! (and i'll keep on reviewing) :) |
 Mea Lux - Mea Duces 2004-04-14 . chapter 12Ooh! Nice plot twist! But I was starting to like Draco :(. Please review my stories and post more chapters fast! |
 texasjeanette 2004-04-14 . chapter 12Uh... wow... you had me totally fooled by Draco... and total YEAH Hermione... good show that you are in fact the perfect Defense against the Dark Arts Teacher... hope she quickly notifies Albus of what happened... too bad he now needs to find a new potions master... perhaps Hermione can take over potions... and the ghost of harry can take over Defense... for a little while? I mean he wouldn't be the first ghost teacher. Anyway... hurry and post, texasejaentte |
 pencil gal 2004-04-14 . chapter 12I must say Draco really is a good actor. I believed he had changed. this was an excellent idea to keep people on their toes. can't wait to see what comes next. |
 texasjeanette 2004-04-13 . chapter 11This story is unique and very interesting... and this last chapter made me cry. hurry and post again soon... and don't despair over the lack of reviews... with this story... you will certainly be getting a lot of them! texasjeanette |
 mistress mary 2004-04-13 . chapter 1 wo ho its back..and in action! |
 Mea Lux - Mea Duces 2004-04-13 . chapter 11Write more! Please? |