nICE.

This is really good! :)

ELLEN! OH MAN! that is just ...ooooh man! *SNIFF!*

*gapes*

Wow... my two favorite poems at this moment are in a Max Steel section. Who would have ever thought it? This, and 'Wings of Steel' never cease to amase me. *puts this up in her locker* Thank you.

Ellen brand, keep it up. Write some poetry.

Like I said before, Ellen, that was beautiful. It's a perfect fit, just like all your poems, and it's got the right emotion. Keep writing!

-Maxy Steel (who has not, of yet, had any sugar today)