I really felt for Jack in that last chapter, I was so pleased it worked out though. Looking forward to more.

Good chapters.

Good chapter.

this is intresting please update soon I would really like to see what happens next and just why was she in that pod

Oh intriguing, very Mulder-esque having a lost sister and all that.
Your writing is fluent and everyone is in character so welldone.
I have no idea where you are going with this plot though and I don't know how you are going to justify the massive improbability that it was his sister abducted out of everyone in the entire world. However I will be reading on with interest.

Oh wow! cool story so far. can't wait to hear what comes next!

hahaha 'you look so old' i wonder how jack will react to that... very interesting concept, i am glad you are brave enough to include the ferlings in ur story considering theres not much known about them. please continue, i would love to read more!
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This is so good and so full of possibilities. I loved Jennifer's remark: You look so old. Looking forward to more updates.

Good story.

hey i like the idea of giving jack a sister. i wonder what the furlings wanted from her?? I can see this story having a few nice plot ideas and some twists and turns